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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 29 Comments
Date Added: August 21, 2006 02:08:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Becoming We

  In our garden of eternity
I gave you all of me
Wrapped up in a blanket of your love
Safety comforts me

Consumed by our ever lasting love
A light, a promise, a shield
to protect and nurture all we can be

In our enchanted heaven of passion
breaking all boundaries of love and reality

You offered yourself, as did I
accepted and accepting, to become we.
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Comment By: FreesHeRi on February 8, 2010 10:29:56 AM Report
This is very beautiful Adri-


Comment By: FreesHeRi on February 8, 2010 10:22:55 AM Report
This is very beautiful Adri-


Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 28, 2010 04:27:14 PM Report
lots of pure, unfiltered emotion comes through in this piece.  "In our enchanted heaven of passion
breaking all boundaries of love and reality." - such a powerful line.  no mystery why this is an award-winner

Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on July 29, 2009 02:20:37 PM Report
Adri - I really ejoyed this work.




Comment By: FreeElla on May 19, 2009 07:56:01 PM Report
that is just beautiful!

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 5, 2008 05:54:27 PM Report
Beautiful Adri, Congrats on this award. I'll surely be reading you some more.

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 5, 2008 05:53:11 PM Report

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 5, 2008 05:53:01 PM Report

Comment By: FreeDavid on July 15, 2008 01:33:43 AM Report
This is a really great poem, I love the flow to it and it just paints pictures of love inside of your head.


Comment By: FreeSteve on June 17, 2008 08:49:43 AM Report
Excellent poem.  Congratulations on the award.
Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on March 13, 2008 04:45:05 AM Report
Congratulations yet again, Adri.

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 12, 2008 08:08:45 AM Report
Beautiful mix of words from the both of you~very-very nice work!


Comment By: FreeGlata on March 12, 2008 06:14:43 AM Report
Well, there ya go! Two in a row, girl! Amazing and wonderful!

congrats to ya both!



Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 10, 2008 08:33:40 AM Report

Adri :  Congratulations on this fine poem winning a Feature Award.  Good co-write,  pretty one.


Lady D

Comment By: FreeS on June 13, 2007 02:05:38 PM Report
great poem girls !!
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on December 29, 2006 03:46:43 AM Report
another beautiful write..i can feel the passion and comfort in this write.

Gentle Dove

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on October 14, 2006 01:06:53 PM Report
A short, sweet statement of love, a very tender collaboration Adri and Jody. You should write more together.   Henry
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 5, 2006 12:13:52 PM Report
Ahah! I knew you guys were getting a little "too" into it! It showed. Nice job!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 17, 2006 03:18:30 PM Report
I must add you two make a pair that for sure..this is a very pretty poem for sure.
great thoughts together...Love--Love... where will we be with outit??
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on September 7, 2006 03:14:33 AM Report
The two of you do make beautiful poetry together! This is amazing, truly heartfelt in every way and I can relate, i love this, gave me goosebumps as I read it because its so close to how I've felt before! LOVE IT!

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 6, 2006 08:52:16 AM Report
a wonderful co-operation of two unique talents. Its all about synergie I reckon.


keep them coming


Ali x

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 21, 2006 09:12:41 PM Report
This is soft, sensual...and a soothing write in tandem, Adri.....Jolen.....


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 21, 2006 05:40:11 PM Report
I never use the word enchanting for some reason..This is just that. This is the kind of love that transens all logic, as it should. Great job, you dolls..:O)..len
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on August 21, 2006 04:09:29 PM Report
"to protect and nurture all we can be

In our enchanted heaven of passion
" Very cool this section, "To protect and nurture" so sweet. and who dosen't love an "enchanted heaven of passion"!!

Very nice all around. Keep up the good work you two.

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on August 21, 2006 03:10:11 PM Report
Adri, my dear; Jolen, my girl, this is beautiful! It is without a word of a lie that I say every line touched me deeply. More than just any love poem, the theme of protection gives it a specific meaning - it is more than "I love you"; it is a promise of constant security which we all need to hear from the one we love and whom loves us. And the title is perfect.

You did good gals, very good! :)

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 21, 2006 08:25:09 AM Report
Adri and Jolen, ...tsk, two been in the kitchen again, have you?? Looks to me like you two cooked up a feast...and I for one, am going to sit down and feast on this, over and over..sweet music I tell ya, get back in there and clean up them dishes! lol..
This waaaaaaaaaas nice ...peaceful, sweet, ..a rushing security and total bliss..yessss...sigh,

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on August 21, 2006 07:24:13 AM Report
you got that right sister!
Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on August 21, 2006 07:11:04 AM Report
Awwww...two of my fave munchkins getting together...sooo cool! i love this and i love you both!
Comment By: FreeJonathan Ivy on August 21, 2006 02:57:13 AM Report
i am truly happy for you Adri. this is a beautiful peace of art.  keep up the great work


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