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Author Name: Freewritelady 9 Comments
Date Added: August 21, 2006 09:08:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sometimes a Stranger
 
 
 
Singing..
and I hear my own voice
to be strange.
Who is she,
that sings this tune?
Some lost woman,
sitting in the back seat
of a car running eighty;
the wind whipping her hair around,
smile in her eyes
that dances through her body.

Laughing...
and I don't recognize the sound.
throwing her head back
her heart light, free,
and ready to take on the world.
No holding back,
grip like a vice;
accepting and loving it.

Crying....
Who is this?
Earmarks of sadness
mapping out the marks on
cheeks that were smiling
just an instant ago
of one who traveled
fast and free,
while she sang along to
what she loved.

Loving...
There is no end to it,
no stopping what issues forth.
Broken a million times
ans still standing to tell about it.
Still embracing the idea,
still strong in the faith that
it exists,
at least somewhere.

Quiet....
and I wish she would say something.
Sometimes, anything.
Sifting, sorting,
trying to make sense,
of a discombobulated life.
Searching;
and knowing not what she'll find,
but its the adventure she loves most.

I would love to know her better..



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 26, 2006 10:46:54 PM Report
FRom the outsside looking in..I have had the same feeling about myself sometimes...Thoughful poem, babe...len
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 7, 2006 05:12:01 AM Report

What a brilliant layered piece.  I love the meaning behind the hidden meaning within the layering of the poem.  This poem makes you think.  A wonderful write, well, like always, really.  Love it dear!!! 
Adri x


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 2, 2006 06:54:48 AM Report
standing ovation!!!

You really do write from the depths of your soul and in that I see so much of how I feel too.

Sometimes we watch as outsiders our alter ego's going about their business and it makes us question so much.

 

From that perspective (being the observer) I have found we should be kinder to ourselves and non judgemental.

When I was going through the fires of hell after leaving my husband I wrote the poem 'Comfort in the Night' in which I described stroking my own hair as I cried my heart out. It was as though the true part of me disassociated itself from the ego part and was comforting me.

 

Yes, I will keep on taking the tablets!!! :-)

Ali xxx who sees all you say.

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on August 27, 2006 04:32:27 PM Report
"Laughing... / And i don't recognise the sound speaks to me in particular, though you have managed to capture the doubts of a lot of us, yet done it with a personal touch which allows the reader to feel involved. This has it all, from nostalgia to longing, from pain to belief.

And besides that, I just love that you used the word discombobulated :)

 

Great work, Barbie.

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 24, 2006 01:00:52 AM Report
Self Exploration? Reflection? We know you Barbie and we love each and every one of you! Joe
Comment By: Freetom on August 23, 2006 01:59:45 PM Report
awwwwww so true Barbie sometimes we just don't know who we are sometimes we are strangers to ourselves I love this poem

hugs kisses

tom

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on August 21, 2006 05:25:45 PM Report
The journey is never over when it comes to finding oneself, you have mapped out this trip quite nicely though and it sounds as if you are enjoying what you are discovering thus far. No matter how long your journey may be Barbie, at some point you will like all you have discovered and smile to yourself and say " That was a great ride ". Enjoy Barbie, enjoy!  Henry
Comment By: FreeAngel on August 21, 2006 04:00:45 PM Report
This can happen when you loose yourself b still trying to find my way back. Can relate so well. Terrific

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 21, 2006 03:10:23 PM Report
Sometimes we surprise ourselves and discover that we're someone that we'd like to know...How's that for talking in circles???

I love each and every one of these facets of you hon...You're beautiful.

Big huggs...

Glata





 


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