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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 12 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2003 06:08:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She Hasn't Seen Me Cry Yet
I sit out on the front step
Face hung in my hands
She hasn't seen me cry yet
She wouldn't understand
There are things I haven't told her
Words I haven't said
So I lie awake and hold her
I hold it in instead

I sit out on the front step
Holding back the tears
She hasn't seen me cry yet
I've hidden it for years
There are things she isn't in on
Stories never told
So I wait until she's long gone
To let it all unfold

I sit out on the front step
Fighting my own pain
She hasn't seen me cry yet
I slowly go insane
There are secrets that I'm keeping
Little tiny lies
But honesty is creeping
It's falling from my eyes

I sit out on the front step
Pretending I'm "okay"
She hasn't seen me cry yet
I'm just pushing her away
There's no more sense in lying
I'm sure that she can see
Each time that I've been crying
She is surely on to me

I sit out on the front step
Just getting up the nerve
She hasn't seen me cry yet
But I'm sure that she has heard
The things I haven't told her
Are catching up with me
I can't bring myself to hold her
I can't stand when she holds me

I sit out on the front step
I think she's had her fill
She hasn't seen me cry yet
And I doubt she ever will
The words I was concealing
Have a life now of their own
Suddenly revealing
That they've left me all alone
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCrystal on June 23, 2004 01:43:19 AM Report
This is to date...my absolute favorite poem on the whole site!!! (not that I've read them all, but I try to read as many as possible) Great great work!!!!
Comment By: Freemelanie del valle on March 19, 2004 04:42:43 AM Report
beautiful too!
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on December 21, 2003 01:57:41 AM Report
Wonderful Write Jake
Great Flow
Good job
Jason brown
Comment By: FreeJessique on November 6, 2003 06:08:12 AM Report
Like one of the other comments .....this hits home to me ... and yet this poem leaves me speechless, just reading those thing actually put into words ..... I am surely going to read all your poem and not miss one =)
Comment By: FreeKay on October 23, 2003 08:18:52 AM Report
wow...this should be made into a song. I can actually see someone singing it. I loved this Jake...hits home for alot of people.
Comment By: FreeLisa on October 11, 2003 09:45:29 AM Report
Leave it. It's beautiful

Comment By: FreeJon on August 29, 2003 03:13:21 AM Report
Just checking back to see what new masterpiece you've written lately. Don't change a thing. It was great, as usual.
Comment By: FreeAngela on August 25, 2003 06:58:19 PM Report
i have no suggestions because it is written from your heart and the way you wanted it to be and for that it is greatly written. as long as your heart and mind is put into it thats all that matters.
Comment By: FreeVictoria on August 25, 2003 06:15:08 PM Report
So emotional! I can feel your pain, and so want to embrace you with a warm hug! Excellent job on the poem as always.
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 25, 2003 10:29:59 AM Report
I like your work as it is...
It is your innermost thoughts and it tore at my heart...
Sad, but solid read...
Margaret
Comment By: FreeAmanda W on August 25, 2003 10:03:04 AM Report
No suggestions I think it's great as is! Well, maybe you could tell what your hiding? but that's just me being nosey! Great write Jake I'd leave it be.
Lol Amanda
Comment By: FreeDenel on August 25, 2003 08:56:26 AM Report
great write - I really liked it




 


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