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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: September 03, 2006 13:09:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Portraying ~*~ Eyes
Her sculptured red long fingernail traced his handsome face 
She looked into his portraying eyes and she saw an empty place 

She look at the stern jaw set with great manly pride
She saw the crystals of pain that burns his salty eyes 

She looked at your  whispering lips that seem to say
" Please my lady look my longing  way" 

The color of his gentle face is golden tan from the sun
She feels the swirling sunsets that he watchs when day is done 

She reads his thoughts that breath from across the distant surf
She reads the passion and longing he so desperately hurts

~A Ponygirl Design~ ponygir;/images1/roses mid.jpg
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Comment By: FreeAngel on September 3, 2006 04:47:30 PM Report
The poem is verybeautiful and the music sublime.


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAngelique on September 3, 2006 03:07:16 PM Report

Reminds me of the classic old love stories. Very romantic, with a bit of a sad undertone. Nicely done.

Comment By: FreeJoe on September 3, 2006 02:20:31 PM Report
Beautifully done. Joe


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