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Author Name: Freeseeker 4 Comments
Date Added: September 03, 2006 14:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Night Walking
The air is cold as I walk down the dark abandoned street.
Everyone is sound asleep, like I should be.
I guess I'm just searching for something to make me feel less alone.
It's three a.m. and I'm wandering the streets looking for something I'm not going to find.
Loneliness is a thick blanket of ice that coats my very soul,
leaving me cold and weighted down.
The street lights cast strange shadows every where.
I can see my breath expelling from me and soaring high above my head,
reaching heights I will never reach.
I should be turning back, going home,
but I move farther and farther away.
Part of me doesn't ever want to go back.
Part of me wonders if I ever will.
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Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 15, 2006 11:17:37 AM Report
I can't even BEGIN to describe how much this poem has become a favorite of mine, Angel.  I can see myself in the very same situation, feeling similarly.  But I'd have said "reaching heights that I hadn't reached YET."  (You know me and my inability to give in.)  Anyway, I really dig this poem, no matter how many times and places I read it.  A fave for sure!
Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on September 5, 2006 11:29:39 AM Report
A very fine description of that evil force"Loneliness"
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 3, 2006 04:31:37 PM Report
Night walking been on thoses streets before and it is a lonly place .. you seem drawn for ward and yet you know you need to go back..or do you?? Heartfelt you touch my soul with this lady.. Hugs ~ She Whispers
Comment By: FreeJoe on September 3, 2006 03:53:13 PM Report
Interesting piece, thoughts, looking for something... Loneliness. Excellent, it really draws one into it...then leaves one wondering.... I really enjoyed this Angelique.

Joe





 


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