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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2006 23:09:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Seasons Of Love

Seasons of Love 


Love burst into my life, so soothing and so unsuspecting,
on a warm spring day.

Our  emotions of words were soft and tender,
 they caressed together with such longing in our eyes ,
and basking in the radiance of our smiles. 

Velvet raindrops stroked our eager  pulsating  flesh
and  it set free our bridled arousing  passions.

Our summer love was voracious so all consuming,
Its  lushness permeated our very existence ,
this tropical body heat of urgent surrender .

Surging fire , climbing fierce like a sweltering sun
submission upon our glistening bodies ,
with the sudden fury of a sensuous thunderstorm .

Glorious Days and  exquisite  nights of rapture ,
 we spent ourselves  with spasms of ecstacy , 
we were united and   inseparable.

~*~


Then,
Autumns whispers witnessed cooler changes,
  her fruit of her passion had ripened first ,
while mine had been slower to mature.


Still there were times our desires were  intoxicating ,
our blood  quickened with waves of tantalizing rhythmn of summer past.
Such contentment we both knew was supplanted now
by our restlessness that lingered in our minds and hearts
~*~

With Winters blast, this love came with cruel ,
harsh, unforgiving weapons words,
our passion lived no longer,
just the feeble gloomy rays of December .
~*~

A'las our love has died with only its essence that lingers, 
broken and empty like the summer cicada shell.

 Withering  falling leaves and fading love are so very much alike ,
 still clinging , lifelessly , to the chosen  barren tree 

~*~

 

* Our love was very sacred  ...  Not profane *
 Could the purest sentiments,once again capture this enthralling love
in the precious arms of  lifes dance ,
could those emotional feelings survive another spring?

I wait and  I wonder 





~A Ponygirl Design~ images5/ touch1/jpg.



~A Ponygirl Design~

Author's Notes:
This poem is based on a poem which ....Michael wrote and which he requested that I re-write  for him. He has advised me he is pleased with the result and that we should write a sequel together
Thank you so much for this honor my dear friend it was a challenge and honor to fine tune this lovely poem of love and heartache
Always ~ Scarlett
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on September 25, 2006 03:29:29 AM Report
Through all seasons. Wonderful She

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 14, 2006 10:07:48 PM Report
YOUR WORDS EXPRESS THE FEELINGS OF ALL SEASONS DEAR ONE!
LOVE IS IN SEASON! BRAVO!|
FLETCH

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 14, 2006 07:58:50 PM Report

So refreshing to read that first line 'love burst into my life'.  I've been walking around the last five minutes or so repeating that line to myself.  It does seem love does that.  Beautiful co-write.


Comment By: FreeLubaina on September 12, 2006 03:53:48 PM Report
Wow this is such a beautiful write and I hope he enjoyed as much as I did.. Thanks for sharing.

Lubs.

Comment By: Freetom on September 12, 2006 01:11:24 AM Report
this is beautiful excellent rewrite India and Micheal great poem to start with

handshakes and hugs kisses

tom

Comment By: FreeMichael on September 12, 2006 12:53:33 AM Report
Scarlett, you have just the right touch to put the  necessary  emotional ingrediant into a poem. Well done, indeed, Michael




 


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