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Comment By:  Valerie Dohren on August 3, 2014 06:46:04 AM |
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Beautiful poem - the stars are always a great source of inspiration.
Val
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| Comment By: Timespell on March 30, 2013 10:58:57 PM |
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nICE sTAR...
always.... keep it close, never let it go....
never let go...
Who's the keeper of your eyes
who's the speaker from the skies
my heart keeps lifting me so high high high high
Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful
Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,
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Comment By:  HOPE on August 1, 2010 12:22:14 PM |
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A beautiful poem. The heaven's are full of mystery and beauty. Wouldn't it be lovely to dance among the stars between Jupiter and Mars.
Tina
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| Comment By: Mujtaba H Zaidi on August 3, 2009 01:45:19 PM |
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You have successfully pointed out towards the sublime thoughtfullness, kind sir!!.... I am really moved!
Regards
Mujtaba
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| Comment By: Amy on June 4, 2008 10:58:40 PM |
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This gave me warm fuzzies. I grew up in Houston near Nasa. My mom worked there during the Apollo missions. This poem took me back to my backyard where my brother would explain all the constellations and talk of all the planets we (man) would explore. 40 yrs later and we haven't gone much further but I never tire of looking up at the stars. Your poem captures the mystery and romance of all that twinkles above us.
~Amy
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| Comment By: Robin Constantinou on July 25, 2007 08:51:01 AM |
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wow, exceptional write, keep reaching for that star,
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| Comment By: Gay Johnson on December 27, 2006 02:41:24 PM |
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Richard, your writing never ceases to amaze me..I love watching the stars...they r the past, the present and the future.
Love Gay
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| Comment By: VizualEnsemble on November 21, 2006 08:44:15 AM |
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~B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L~ I love watching the stars at night, the view is never the same. Lovely visions placed so gently within the readers heart. Thanks for sharing.
~Penny/Vizualensemble~
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| Comment By: Angel on November 13, 2006 10:43:42 AM |
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Beautiful write so romantic and gentle. I do love watching the moon and stars in the sky
Love Angelxx
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| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on November 8, 2006 01:58:12 PM |
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Oh Gosh Rich.....this is you...this is why I always love your writing. I love the star, moon and sky..then mix it with romance....I just melt.Utterly tender, devoted and beautiful, with a hint of sadness. <sighs>
~Cindy
*fave*
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| Comment By: Cliffton Clay Cromberg on November 5, 2006 02:40:21 PM |
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Rich, Our spirits are part of this enigma that we all share an earthly kin! We all were born into this universal rhyme! Your imagery, Wonderful! The stars are like love, there are fleeting moments when we've reached out and gathered the beauty of it's light, and other times when we've reached for something unobtainable. Beautiful write!!
Sincerely, Clay TheWolf...
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on October 11, 2006 09:09:00 AM |
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Nice poem...I like it...:O)
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| Comment By: Joe McNinney on September 26, 2006 04:25:20 PM |
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Now this is just terrific Rich, very romantic and tender. While you are reaching for that star, extend just a little further for her! Joe
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on September 22, 2006 02:23:04 AM |
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From one mere mortal to another let me say this... if you love her this deeply reach out for her...perhaps the unobtainable can be obtainable. What do you have to lose?
This is lovely but the acceptance of the situation as it is ruffled me a bit. (as my comment above shows) Boldy you follow her...that is great...now boldy make your move.
~Barbara~ *giving advice that wasn't asked for but hoping you won't mind*
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| Comment By: The Mystic Poet on September 19, 2006 07:47:34 PM |
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I love the line "Enigma of my universe" just smashing, bloody smashing thats what it is!
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| Comment By: Glata on September 19, 2006 09:46:02 AM |
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Beautiful work, Rich...and sometimes I can so absolutely agree...Love is as unobtainable as the stars!
Keep reaching out, hon...you'll reach that star one day and she'll shine brightly just for you.
Hugs...
Glata
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Comment By:  Ann on September 18, 2006 06:20:11 AM |
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Nicely done Rich. Calm and peaceful with just enough wonder to make the mind think a bit.
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on September 18, 2006 04:41:34 AM |
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Well Rich I guess stars are all about reflection, lost love,mystery and affection and they will still be there long after our demise, but of course memories may last forever for some of us.nice write.
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