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Author Name: Premiumtinadee 3 Comments
Date Added: September 21, 2006 19:09:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I thought
While writing a letter the other day
Thinking I heard you call
So I took time out to pray
Sensing you were in the hall
 
I thought I heard you call to me today
When I arose to greet a rainy day
 
I thought you called out to me
While sipping my morning tea
 
While writing a letter the other day
Thinking I heard you call
So I took time out to pray
Sensing you were in the hall
 
I thought I heard my name
When into the room I came
 
Listening to the rustling of the leaves
I thought I heard you call out for me
 
While writing a letter the other day
Thinking I heard you call
So I took time out to pray
Sensing you were in the hall
 
 
Hearing you call out my name last night
Shortly after bedding around midnight
 
I thought your voice was wispering to me
Be still I will always be watching thee
 
I arose to look out my window
Watching raindrops hitting the sill
My heart was filled with such sorrow
Knowing you will be forever still
Author's Notes:

Grieve comes in stages, it's been since march but sometimes I can still here my mother calling me.  I know she's gone but sometimes it hard to accept realality.

I have been having a difficult time lately and have been really busy and had a really bad case of writters block.  But I hope to get through all my messages and the great poems I have missed all week.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJeff on September 28, 2006 08:35:20 AM Report
Tina, I loved this emotional write

Greif does comes in stages....the slightest thing can makes all the painful memories come flooding back.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 22, 2006 02:58:19 PM Report
Tina: lovely write.  Your Mother is in your heart and smiling down from Heaven.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 22, 2006 11:42:27 AM Report
Grief is about stages Tina, Thats why time is such a good healer,after my loss I was still laying places at table, yet knowing they were gone , it did'nt make any sense, eventually reality does take over,and you accept it, just take your time,keeping busy does help,best wishes.




 


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