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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 6 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2006 21:09:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THIS SEPTEMBER
The reason why this September is so cold,
is because you are not here for me to hold.
I am deserving of your reprimanding,
I shouldn't have left you there standing.
As the leaves are changing to their Fall time hues,
I am sitting here alone singing the blues.
This September is cold and I am wanting you more,
I will sit here and hope that you walk through the door.
Author's Notes:
Candy wrote a poem titled "September", this was my response. Thank you again Candy for the inspiration here, Joe
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Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on September 26, 2006 11:34:56 PM Report
Joe, this poem plays with my heartstrings...brings me to the point of tears....wake me up when September ends...
Laura

Comment By: FreeCandy on September 26, 2006 03:41:13 PM Report
I was so impressed with this when I read it... It was sucha beautiful response! Im glad you posted it! I know Ive said it b4 but i do believe this is my favorite one...
Comment By: FreeCheryl Greenwell on September 26, 2006 02:34:38 PM Report
great flow Joe ....Nice work......C
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 26, 2006 08:04:57 AM Report
LOL @ Henry! Seems he's on your case once more, Joe!

On the serious side...this is a very good write...but in agreement with Henry...You need to go after HER and show that your heart is true.

Sometimes swallowing that pride and taking that first step is the hardest part...

Wonderful write, Joe, and I know that she'll appreciate this!

hugs...Glata

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on September 26, 2006 06:23:06 AM Report
Joseph, Joseph oh when will you learn

You can't say words to make women burn

Tis then tou will incur their wrath

Destroying you and all ib their path

Joseph, listen to me kind sir

She'll not walk through that door, you must go after her

 

LOL, I could not resist Joe, great response on your part my friend.  Henry

Comment By: FreeAngel on September 26, 2006 04:26:48 AM Report
Shivers reading this felt the emptiness of being alone in this one Joe. Brilliant

 

Love Angelxx





 


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