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Author Name: FreeGaia 4 Comments
Date Added: September 26, 2006 18:09:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Walk
 
Take a walk down the beach
Feel the sand under your feet
Listen to the waves push on the shore
Smile as the sun slowly sets
Let the breeze of the air move accross your face
Watch the birds as they fly away,
Notice the bench with the old man sitting on
Smiling as he remembers a lost childhood song
Watch the boats go out to sea
Think of the adventures they might have
Take care not to step on a childs castle
As this is the childs fortress of defence
Look up at the mountain made of chalk
Notice the sun setting behind
Think of a loved one you may miss
Wishing they could walk with you accross the beach
Notice the ocean clear as crystal truly can be
Now take a look at your reflection
Smile to yourself and think
At how one simple place's beauty, can truly be.








Author's Notes:
Walking down a beach to busy thinking to notice anything around.
 
Hope you like it, also hoping not to corny near the end?

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeChrissy.D on September 30, 2006 05:17:22 PM Report
This is a very peaceful poem.  It makes me want to go to the beach haha too bad its almost winter.

Comment By: FreeJeff on September 28, 2006 08:32:06 AM Report
This is a very good expressive write Ryan.

So glad to see you posting again.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 26, 2006 08:16:22 PM Report
Ryan: a totally lovely walk on the beach.  Very well done --  I really enjoyed this walk.

 

Lady  Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeAngelic Light on September 26, 2006 06:14:44 PM Report
Awww this one is so beautiful I can imagine in my head...lovely view by the way lol but great write here! Hope to hear more soon

~much luv~

*angelic_light*





 


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