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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2006 00:09:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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It,s Crazy I know, But That,s Me
Within a cell of pure white, each night



I pull up the sheets, hold back the fright



I,m mad and iknow it



But try not to show it



It,s crazy i know, but that,s me



 



The thing i hate most is my own ghost



Who lurks and smirks in the wardrobe



He peeps and i scream



Could this be a dream?



It,s crazy i know, but that,s me



 



Tiny people creep and crawl



Eyes protruding out the wall



Outstretched arms that nearly touch



Morning callers i hate so much



Will never ever let me be



The person within who longs to be free



 



Within a cell of pure white, each night



I pull up the sheets, hold back the fright



This mad world of mine



Will all end in time



It,s crazy i know, but that,s me.



 
Author's Notes:

This poem was inspired by Ivor Gurney.

Origionally submitted on my friend Leah Lopez,s site.

I now have my own account and able to re-produce my poem on my own site.

                                                                  John Carter.

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumJanet Gentry on April 16, 2007 04:37:10 PM Report
John,

I can SO relate to this poem!  So well written!  Thanks for sharing it.

 

Janet

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on December 2, 2006 07:40:23 PM Report
Are these the demons that follow us to sleep? I've spent a lifetime caring for those who experience that madness. I suggest a bit of Thorazine. Very creative John. The repitition of the last lines carries the piece well. jp
Comment By: FreeAngel on December 2, 2006 05:51:10 PM Report
Strange what night time can do. Excellent John

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on November 6, 2006 02:07:50 PM Report
Wow.  I loved the way this sounds when read aloud.  Nice work.  Really has that rhythm that pushes the dark madness right into the reader.  Well done ~Pam
Comment By: FreeShadow Rai on November 5, 2006 09:22:29 PM Report
LOL, Wickedly horiffic with subtle humor ta boot!

 

"They're comming to take me ha ha

They're comming to take me away

ho ho

hee hee

ha ha

To the funny farm

Where life is beautiful all the time

And I'll be happy to see those nice young men

And their clean white coats

'Cause they're comming to me away ha ha"

 

Ever heard of the song?

 

Awsome work here, I look forward to more.

 

All the Best, Shad *^_^*

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 29, 2006 12:06:21 AM Report
John,
First of all Welcome to our Site.. you will enjoy it here..great writers and friends...now this is so different I l ike this.. Later~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 28, 2006 06:48:55 AM Report
I like this as it shows a dark sort of humerous look at craziness.
Comment By: PremiumAngel on September 28, 2006 12:30:13 AM Report
That's really cool, I like it. The eerie, uneasy tone shows through really well.




 


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