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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 7 Comments
Date Added: October 02, 2006 11:10:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Just Couldn't Stay


 




Just hold and love me now while Iím here,
like the whispering winds I will disappear.

 The pouring rains will come and go,
you will have nothing but shivering  cold.

  Catch a falling star and before it hits the earth,
 after it shatters what is it worth?


 Throw back the heavens and spin the silver stars,
donít forget Gemini,Aries, Venus and mars .

The moon will be helpless without its white gold,
 and you my darling will have nothing to hold.

  Listen in the night as it becomes ever so still,
 I will not be there and I never will .

So love me today before this precious time slips away,
 but remember my Darling, I will love you always,
 I just couldnít stay.




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHarold Ham McLelland on May 10, 2007 03:09:35 AM Report
Goodness India...  You have SO Many poems!!!  This one is the so impressive...  Very heart felt and also inspirational...  The music, picture and your words flow very nicely!!!  Ham
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 13, 2006 04:13:04 AM Report
Tears fall from these eyes that feel this sadness and emptiness of being the one left without love. This has to go into my favs She it is just so very very beautiful

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 8, 2006 03:13:31 PM Report
I like the way that you just let your emotions run through this poem. Can;t wait to read more.
Great talented writer you are.
Lubs.
Comment By: Freejoey on October 3, 2006 04:04:47 PM Report
very loving poem the music sets the tone for a most wonderful read
good job and keep up the good work

Comment By: PremiumCharles C. Griggs on October 3, 2006 09:36:27 AM Report





Dear lady this is your best ever- cg


Comment By: Freetom on October 2, 2006 05:55:16 PM Report
such a sad write about a lost love, the death of a lover, or even a dream of a lover gone to soon excellently penned India

hugs kisses

tom

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 2, 2006 12:37:45 PM Report
Your heart shines Dear Lady with every word. True love lasts even after we are gone .
EXCELLENT WRITE! YOU ARE SO GIFTED!
LOVE TO YOU...............................BLUE WOLF





 


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