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Author Name: Freepenfold18 9 Comments
Date Added: October 07, 2006 07:10:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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In Thoughts Sublime.
Have I but breath to whisper thy name
Or mould thy features in the winds of time
Hath love now branded upon my brain
Passions excess in thoughts sublime
 
Each breath a torment that we're apart
Thy touch so soft upon the skin
The gentle pounding of the heart
Belies the love that's held within.
                                                       
Upon the morrow these eyes may see
That which is deemed as something shallow
A vacant space on sheets of cream
On scented air of melted tallow.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Comment By: FreeGlata on October 10, 2006 09:15:40 AM Report
This IS sublime thoughts...A beautiful rendering here, Graham...that exposes your feelings so well.

Awesome work....tender and sweet...

Hugs

Glata

Comment By: FreeAngel on October 9, 2006 02:10:06 PM Report
Beautiful sums the words up in one

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeJoe on October 7, 2006 02:34:33 PM Report
Very nice Sir. A most enjoyabale poem. Joe
Comment By: FreeMichael on October 7, 2006 02:25:34 PM Report
Graham, you and Margaret are the masters of this beautiful, traditional poetry style. This is where"101" should begin. Be well, Michael
Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on October 7, 2006 12:42:38 PM Report
This one truly is sublime Graham.  A wonderful write.

 

Kevin

Comment By: TrialAnn on October 7, 2006 10:33:55 AM Report
The title is a perfect match for this poem...sublime..;)


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 7, 2006 09:39:39 AM Report
Sir Graham,

 This is just breathless to read first thing in the morning.. your heart is whispering across the endless sky and the breeze that lingers with loving emotions from your gentle heart ..your whispering  words become a melody of morning birds with the dawning of a new day.   Always~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 7, 2006 07:48:21 AM Report
W........O............W...........!!

Well, I don't know 'bout that poor couples night...shallow or deep?.....but this poem was born of a depth and intricacy unparallelled...FABULOUS, Graham...loved the language...

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeH. Louise on October 7, 2006 07:35:05 AM Report
This is  beautiful.
Wonderfully written.

Hannah
x





 


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