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Author Name: TrialAnn 4 Comments
Date Added: October 13, 2006 18:10:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Frozen
It would not be wrongó
in this world of mishappen image,
to say the captured moment
when you looked away
and then back, was a snapshot
of vulnerability.

Perhaps the October moonlight
fell in shadows perplex
or perchance it was the mind's deception,
but I heard the rustle of your hand
as it brushed the strands of my hair
to the side and I felt my insides tremble
when your eyes found mine again,
and it would not be wrongó
to hold that piece of time, frozen.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on December 6, 2006 10:57:06 AM Report
Just curious Ann...what was the challenge of the day?
:o)
Thanks~

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on December 6, 2006 10:37:59 AM Report
Beautiful, Ann....

I can relate to this poem inside and out...in my own way I suppose...

This really captivated me, and touched in a very personal way.

Delusion(mine own) is not always a bad place :o)

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on October 14, 2006 11:18:14 PM Report
Wow!  I loved this...it conjures such a beautiful feeling.  Also, you have such a mastery with words...enjoyed your use of  mishappen, perplex, perchance,

 

Cari

Comment By: FreeTodd on October 13, 2006 10:23:21 PM Report
Ann, I just loved this. Great imagery helps the reader see the story as much as reading it. Seductive with a touch of class. Excellent job. 




 


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