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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 36 Comments
Date Added: October 18, 2006 08:10:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Touch of You
The exhilarating feel
of new emotions
flow through my veins.
Exquisite moments
stolen in time…
All senses laid bare.

I see you in front of me,
your captivating smile.
Physically not yet to touch
but intensity far more real
then ever could be expected…
Making me feel you, so real.

Touching over time and space
stretch out before our feet.
Slowly, step by step we walk our path
neared with every breath we take.
Wanting the inevitable closer,
and to feel more,

within me, the touch of you.
Author's Notes:
To my love
Well yet again, yes, another one :-)  And to that wonderful my J...  Thanks for all the advice!!!! 
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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on December 4, 2010 11:08:52 PM Report

Wonderfully well written piece that you have here Dear!  I love it and think that is stated BEAUTIFULLY!



Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 22, 2010 03:15:09 PM Report
sometimes the greatest intensity comes from the mind and not through the touch - great work - again clearly an award-winner.  I'm impressed with you ability to say so much in relatively few words.
Comment By: FreeLubaina on November 18, 2009 03:58:02 PM Report
A beautiful expression of your heart.Good write.



Comment By: FreeDean on April 20, 2009 04:14:41 AM Report

Adri, you touched mine so I touched yours, thanks for the read.

Great write, a well deserved award…

Comment By: on June 7, 2008 04:06:13 PM Report
> that really hits home for me, thank you adri... \"touching across time & space\"
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 5, 2008 09:05:27 AM Report

Some have said that the anticipation makes the moment what it will become. This is an excellent poem from a wonderful writer.  Congratulations for the award and inspiration given.  Steve

Comment By: FreeRandy messersmith on March 4, 2008 01:18:08 PM Report
Deep like an ocean...Careful thought and great choice of words.

Sensational, CONGRATULATIONS on the award, well merited.

~Randy M>(Noahlittle)

Comment By: FreeSteven on January 6, 2008 02:01:51 PM Report
Great poem, good job. The poem is really memorizing!
Comment By: Freeabby on October 11, 2007 02:05:42 PM Report
The touch of love is incomparable and drives one to inexplicable summits. Adri, your love poems are classics. 


Comment By: FreeBollimuntha venkata Ramana on March 27, 2007 01:33:57 PM Report
A heartful smooth touch with words Adri
Comment By: FreeChuck on December 22, 2006 03:07:28 AM Report
I really like the words that end it... laid real...feel more... of you... for me it evokes strong emotions of longing... and the shape of it is almost a tear drop... it's nice and sad... I don't know much about poetry... but I do know about about feeling... and I feel like I like this one.... good one!
Comment By: FreeLife Is Just on November 21, 2006 12:12:43 AM Report
Simply love it. Nice phrases :-)

Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on November 16, 2006 03:33:09 AM Report
You nailed this one. Congrat's!!!


Comment By: FreeChristin Mowery on November 15, 2006 01:16:12 PM Report
Congrats! This is great.


Comment By: Freelost angel... on November 10, 2006 12:45:48 PM Report
I love your choice of words!I think it's one of the beautiful love poetries I've ever come across,simple,sweet yet so meaningful and touching:)

Well deserved award

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 7, 2006 12:03:42 PM Report
Well, honey! Congrats! Very deserving of this award~! I'm thrilled for you!



Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on October 31, 2006 09:42:36 PM Report
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH Congrats..........sorry long over due!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 31, 2006 01:42:08 PM Report
Terrific write Adri, congrats on the award, Joe
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 29, 2006 11:47:21 PM Report
WHOOOOOO-EEEEEE...Adri, hun, look at this!! WOW, way to go girlfriend! I'm telling ya, that sneaky little love bug is nibbling away at you, pretty soon there will be nothing left of you. LOL Oh well, we will still have your award winning poems to read! CONGRATULATIONS!!!


~Barbara~ *blowing a very loud noise maker*

Comment By: TrialAnn on October 29, 2006 09:58:13 PM Report
Great job..congratulations on the award!

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 29, 2006 09:23:43 PM Report
Splendid write...refreshing love poem!
Congratulations on your award~

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on October 29, 2006 09:07:17 PM Report

Congratulations, Adri. I knew this would get the gold.

Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on October 26, 2006 04:21:27 PM Report
Once again another beautiful love poem for your love....this line is amazing "neared with every breath we take" it really means something, breathing we take it so much for granted, and then with every breath you are closer to seeing him, utterly amazing.

Comment By: FreeJonathan Ivy on October 24, 2006 11:07:26 PM Report
this is a great work adri those emotions u speek of are wonderfull are they not?
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 23, 2006 08:57:39 PM Report
Bout time!!...:O)///Raw love-power, beautifully expressed, Adri..Fine example of free verse...len
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on October 23, 2006 04:54:50 PM Report
A great expression of love Adri, I think you got this one dead on!! Henry
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 23, 2006 12:06:28 PM Report
Lovely Feel to this work of art!
Splendid Write!
Yours ......Fletch

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 22, 2006 07:07:21 AM Report
ah the delight of young love....mmmm makes me all dreamy


Ali x

Comment By: FreeLinear Z on October 21, 2006 06:39:02 AM Report
I agree with your J, this is juicy stuff. A great poem of love and potential. Very well written and far beyond me.

Be well, Linear.

Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 20, 2006 10:16:23 AM Report
The rhythm just bleed perfection. Great choice of words! Excellent write.You are very talented my friend.Thanks for sharing.Take Care & God Bless...

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on October 20, 2006 06:17:41 AM Report
Adri, you have this free verse thing nailed. This is, as its predecessors, beautiful. No need for the almost apologetic 'about' when you pull it off with such syle and ease.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 20, 2006 03:26:47 AM Report
Oh hun, I knew sooner or later you would realize how much you cared about me and write a poem to express it. *big old grin*


You are glowing with love in this poem...I can see the floodgates of love and passion are wide open...all systems GO.


This is lovely...just as love is.


~Barbara~ *who just noticed her name does NOT start with J...aww shucks*

Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on October 19, 2006 01:39:41 PM Report
This well written and full of vivid pictures.
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 18, 2006 09:59:52 PM Report

That's it, Adri!  Keep 'em coming back for more!  You got the magic touch!

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on October 18, 2006 12:48:49 PM Report
Intensity intense, to feel a touch without physically touching... very intense, I like a lot! :o)
Comment By: FreeGlata on October 18, 2006 08:36:36 AM Report
ooohhhh Girl....Sweet Ah is in love....and it's so beautiful!!!  What a wonderful write hon...and your love will be over the moon with this one!



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