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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: October 22, 2006 16:10:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Just Words

Just Words


In the tangled mess

I call my mind

This boggy cess

Where love was blind


I should have crept

But I ran

To be with you

Foolish man


Now he sleeps

Where I used to lay

Now I wish

For a brighter day.

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Comment By: FreeAdri on December 9, 2006 07:51:18 AM Report
John, I know what you mean here...  But there is always a brighter day...  Great write my dear. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeJoe on October 23, 2006 02:35:57 PM Report
Sad write John, your writing expresses it that it can be felt. I guess most of us have experienced this.


Comment By: FreeAngel on October 23, 2006 12:49:51 PM Report
How I felt this one to be replaced by another. Many years ago now but the pain still runs deep


Love letters in the sand so to speak. Very sad write




Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 22, 2006 04:43:34 PM Report

In the tangled mess

I call my mind

This boggy cess

Where love was blind.... Love has only eyes for what it wants to see..... Foolish we become with silk words that touch the naked heart with just a rose petal kiss...I understand this madness better than you know...  Hugs ~ She Whispers


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