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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: October 28, 2006 00:10:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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opposite meaning


you said that
you could love me
how i unwrapped
the riddle i had knotted
in my heart
imagined my surprise
when i counted my ribs
and found not the barest thing
to be worthy of shroud
for your words
draping painful in opposite meaning.
Author's Notes:
The One I Knew In 1991.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 29, 2006 03:39:36 AM Report
I know this pain, but even though the music has stopped, I wouldn't have missed the dance for anything. *hugz to you*  This is compact, a hard hit. I feel this.

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 28, 2006 07:32:11 PM Report
~Andrew
Hard to expose yourself yourself deeply to someone that you love, then get hurt in
return by them....its easy to keep a distance from people, just to protect what was
hurt in the first place..trusting is hard. Hope in time your pain will heal to where you
can open your heart once again...
Im sorry for your pain~
Letting go of the heartache, like this write..helps nurture and build back a solid
foundation for you to start your life once again without her.
I could keep going but I will end with this...
Lovely write, please keep sharing..
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 28, 2006 12:27:58 PM Report
So beautiful.. yest so sad is the sound of a shattered heart... Hugs ..I'm sorry my friend... Scarlett
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 28, 2006 07:57:17 AM Report
I think it is good therapy, Andrew, to allow these types of feelings out...
We've all been there...love bites sometimes...but we are organic creatures which heal and rejeuvenate ourselves.

You may need to make more pleasant recent memories before you can toss that handful of dirt...or require some form of closure...Poetry oft helps us find that serenity in ourselves.

Heartfelt write Andrew...

Hugs,
Pamela






 


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