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Comment By:  Lynn Cowman on September 23, 2007 03:35:38 AM |
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so sad, and yet a well written poem to read..
Congratulations on your award, well deserved!
Lyn.
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| Comment By: Joe Petro on December 15, 2006 01:42:30 PM |
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This can be taken a couple of ways. Or is the reason that I stand here a reason not at all. Great line. A belated congratulations on the award. jp
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| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on November 20, 2006 11:53:19 PM |
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Congrats on winning this award John. Great work!
~Cindy
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| Comment By: J. Kirby on November 20, 2006 04:16:47 PM |
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"But to love, be loved back, is the reason I will fall." This line seems, to me, to be a slight oxymoron. To fall because one is loved...well, love can be a powerfull thing. With best wishes...
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| Comment By: Randy Harrison on November 16, 2006 06:11:17 AM |
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Congrat's. I'm on the edge of my seat.
Peace,
Randy
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| Comment By: Angel on November 5, 2006 03:50:03 AM |
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I had images of you standing on the edge of the world and having a feeling of jumping right off. The ledge will get bigger and you will feel better it just takes time, like grief. One day at a time. Some days will be better than others. Its the nights that seem to be the worse. Just a thought but a pet helps I got a dog to replace him lol, (this was years ago) they are wonderful loyal and so loving.
Hugs
Love Angelxx
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| Comment By: She Whispers on October 30, 2006 07:41:31 PM |
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John,
Life is an Adventure that is for sure...We must take a chance to be happy... and of course sometimes we still fall... but it is better than not being loved at all>> great poem food for thought..Hugs ~ Scarlett
To leap would be
A great adventure
I really feel a call.
But to love
Be loved back
Is the reason I will fall.
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| Comment By: Micky McMaster on October 28, 2006 09:09:02 PM |
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tight write ,John
crackles with expectations,great twist
Well done!
Micky
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| Comment By: Joe on October 28, 2006 03:15:44 PM |
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Excellent write John, enjoyed the way you have expressed this, holds one right to the end. Joe
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| Comment By: She Whispers on October 28, 2006 09:22:00 AM |
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John,
Life is such a mystery..just when we think we have it all it crashes.. it does put us on a ledge wondering which way to go.. stand with the warm wind in our face or just jump in the cold water below to the bottom of the merky dept...to forever be lost... Great question... As for me I love life to much... I'm just the type I sto, look and listen...and wait..be surprised what you learn and get if you wait until its time... Hugs ~ Scarlett
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| Comment By: Adri on October 28, 2006 05:47:04 AM |
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I agree with Cheryl... you write so well! This is a perfect example of it... You have a way with words John, you use them in a very unique way and I love your write style. And oh yes, that is the best reason to fall, love!!
Adri x
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