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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: October 29, 2006 10:10:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You and I

You and I




 




Fill my life




With a million tomorrows




Not the promise of yesterday




Not a life full of sorrows




Take my earthly days




 Dark and cold




Fill them with a light




That will shine through




Until we are old.




Unlock this door




And you will free




A love so true




That wants to be




A love so strong it cannot die




The purest heart




Beats only




For you and I.




 




 




 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJolanta Gradowicz on November 19, 2006 04:04:22 AM Report
It's really great. I like especially the first lines - wonderful!

Best wishes,

Jolanta :)

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 4, 2006 11:32:44 PM Report
John, I love this romantic loving write. It is truly lovely.

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 4, 2006 05:08:13 PM Report
Beautiful words of love

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeJoe on October 29, 2006 11:50:51 AM Report
Love at its best John, nicely done,  great title. Joe
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 29, 2006 11:07:29 AM Report
Lovely write, John...

Smooth and melodical~

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 29, 2006 10:43:42 AM Report

Not this is love!!!!  What a wonderful and truly beautiful piece of poetry.  What expression, what total devotion...  Really beautiful and truly romantic.  It speaks to my overly romantic heart...  Love this John.
Adri x


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 29, 2006 10:37:39 AM Report
John,

  Written silk words like a silk thread woven to close all the past hurt... to love again ..To find a powerful love is hard to do sometimes to survive through all of lifes storms.. I really love this very pretty and it will touch all the ladies hearts....I know it touched mine..
. ~ Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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