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Author Name: Freeseeker 6 Comments
Date Added: October 31, 2006 10:10:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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What Was That!?
I hear running water.
There had been no problems until now.
I locked all the doors, didn't I?
I haven't given anyone else a key.
But I hear running water,
and fear rushes through me.

I came home from work I unlocked the door,
came in and locked it behind me.
I had fallen asleep on the couch
in front of a 1/2 eaten lean cuisine.

But now...
I hear running water.

When the water swells around my feet
it startles me back to reality.
Before I had fallen asleep....
I had started running a bath!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on November 17, 2006 02:25:03 PM Report
Heheh!  Just as funny as the first time I read it!
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on November 4, 2006 10:02:17 AM Report
Isn't it just so... thoise surreal moments between waking and sleeping~

An excellent convayance...you captured it perfectly :o)

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 31, 2006 08:27:22 PM Report
Stark fear, followed by,"Oh Sh*t...:O)
Comment By: FreeTobi on October 31, 2006 07:35:15 PM Report
LoL, well, at least your floors are clean!! I like the suspense and the way you draw the reader in wondering...Killer last line!!

Comment By: PremiumRobertM on October 31, 2006 07:05:09 PM Report
True story? I hope not, but if so you can always pretend it was a bad leak in the roof on a really rainy day. Very, very rainy. Hope you are well.  RM
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 31, 2006 06:56:15 PM Report
Oh__my__ your in trouble now... ~ She Whispers




 


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