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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: November 01, 2006 19:11:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Total ~*~ Submission

Seductive mystery plays upon her pastel lips,
her free spirit circles his heart with a moonlight lushness,
his pulse become the tempatation that lives deep inside
the emotions of his manly frustrations.

A surprised glance, the only clue of his own hidden secrets,
was swathed safe inside the folds of his inspirations,
which lived in his mind, where boundaries were no limit.

Entrapped in his controled mind with self absorbed thoughts
 constantly formed with longing, he did not admit
 to the passing of his wasted empty time.

Spluttering words scatter colors of shaped realizing  hues
that lurked in his hidden heart, so as not to explain his
passion to anyone but himself.

Verbalizing his thoughts with clinched teeth,
 it was a personal sacrifice to extenquish
the constant obession that he fought daily
with his tangled mind.

She pulled the entrapping night in closer,
as it wrapped around him a warm blanket
from the cold and wet rain, her throbbing pulse becames
the captive musical rhythm, 
which she pounded into his surrendering brain,
until he gave in, to total open submission.

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~R M G~

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Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on November 12, 2006 07:28:03 PM Report
Fine Write!
You are amazing!
Yours ...Fletch

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 2, 2006 04:33:09 PM Report
Great write She


Love Angelxxxxx

Comment By: Freetom on November 2, 2006 02:24:26 PM Report

very beautiful and sensual and interesting writing India, a soft tender submission to give into to

hugs kisses


Comment By: FreeMichael on November 2, 2006 02:31:21 AM Report
Very good, Scarlett! You OWN this genre! Michael


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