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Comment By:  Jolanta Gradowicz on February 4, 2007 01:35:02 PM |
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I believe that today you would write this poem in more optimistic way...
Warmest wishes :)
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on November 8, 2006 11:33:03 AM |
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I know the feeling well....
sad and haunting
Ali x
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| Comment By: Angel on November 5, 2006 03:25:36 AM |
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A house feels like a shell when there is no fun and laughter in it. To share it with other brings the house alive it feels good to go home. When it is an empty shell it is hard to go home alone to emptiness.
Moving write
Love Angelxx
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Comment By:  Moon Fairy on November 2, 2006 07:35:23 PM |
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Doleful write John~
Loved the last few lines...a gem of a post!
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| Comment By: Wide Awake on November 2, 2006 07:28:36 PM |
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And emptiness
Is the way I live
...The way of the sage. :o)
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| Comment By: Wide Awake on November 2, 2006 07:27:19 PM |
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HA~ BRILLIANT Write! :o)
Loved the metaphor use and the last two lines most especially :o)
Best wishes,
Pamela
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| Comment By: She Whispers on November 2, 2006 07:04:39 PM |
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The house that I live in
Is the cold
The warm is the life I seek
And emptiness
Is the way I live
Your heart speaks with such longing... Hugs ~ Scarlett
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