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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: November 12, 2006 12:11:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A big place
A big place



 



Dancing in the shadow of dreams



Bathing in the lyrical light




Swimming in an ocean of words




The world is such a big place, tonight




 




Listen to the symphony, of souls




Crying every night, while you sleep




Wanting so much peace in their life




The world is such a big place, tonight

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Comment By: FreeAngel on December 2, 2006 05:55:50 PM Report
It is huge and when none is there to make it better it seems even bigger. Hugs

 

Wonderful John

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 19, 2006 11:57:02 AM Report
As you have detailed it for us, John, the world with its souls secluded , one by one, but all placed in a gigantic arena place...

Good imagery..

Margaret...enjoying your works..

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 13, 2006 12:32:03 PM Report
Oh John this is just say beautiful with flow and natural rhythm...  I love this!! 
Adri x

Comment By: TrialAnn on November 12, 2006 02:22:04 PM Report
Creative imagery in this. Yes, it can feel that way sometimes....Nice work.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 12, 2006 12:33:19 PM Report
John,

 Very beautiful poem yes, it is a big world out their just waiting to really live in it with happiness.. We do have much strife in our daily lives..but that is life it is not always cherrys and roses... The cholate melts and the needle thorns shreds our hearts...  Good thing come to thoses who wait..I'm Told!!  You write what you feel Love or Heartaches.. its a part of who we are!! You write and I will read..after all I am a fan of yours my friend..hugs ~ Scarlett





 


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