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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 19 Comments
Date Added: November 20, 2006 11:11:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dreaming Truth

When first I saw you
It was in my dreams by night
Where I shared with you
Together
The need within
The hunger inside
To be part of you
By day and sunlight

Not knowing your eyes
Not seeing your face
But
Upon my lips
Already feeling your breathe
Familiar
At home

Now remembering this
And knowing it’s true…
I have loved you
Before I knew you…
It’s evident  now,
Though and through
I have been dreaming of you
Long before I have met you…




 

Author's Notes:
Have been dreaming of you forever...



And thank you so much to John Carter for feeling pity on this blocked writer and sent me some lines to get the creative juices flowing...  Thanks John for the help! 


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on June 10, 2009 03:57:48 PM Report
An Adri classic.  The way you write about love... you deserve an easier run with it.
Comment By: FreeSteve on October 27, 2008 01:21:17 PM Report

Such a wonderful sentiment to love.  Your words surround the reader and release gentle emotions.


Comment By: Freejag on June 3, 2008 05:19:42 AM Report
A poem of longing and hope beautifully expressed

Comment By: Freeabby on October 15, 2007 08:25:45 AM Report
Sweet piece - moving and emotional.

Abby 

Comment By: FreeAvik Shee on December 11, 2006 05:19:41 AM Report
Exquisite piece of expression
Comment By: FreeAvik Shee on December 11, 2006 05:18:48 AM Report

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on November 25, 2006 08:41:33 AM Report
Sigh...what a wonderful poem on discovery of a soul mate...
You breathe tremendous life into this write through experience...heartfelt...
BEAUTIFUL, Adri, just beautiful~

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on November 25, 2006 06:06:21 AM Report
I have loved you

Before I knew you

 

That is how you know it is the real thing. February will be here before you know it.

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 23, 2006 01:55:25 AM Report
Adri, this is an instant fav. So romantic and dreamy. Terrific write, Joe
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 23, 2006 01:53:01 AM Report
"Familiar
At home"...these wonderful words tell me of the ease and comfort of your love for him. We visit one another in dreams...often before we ever meet, you are so right Adri. These are lovely thoughts here hun! *hugz to you*

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 22, 2006 09:38:11 PM Report
Great to see ya posting again..That is true of true love, kid..It feels like you've known the person long before you met them..Lovely poem, Adri...len

 

PS..."breath"

Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on November 22, 2006 08:21:27 AM Report
I knew I loved you before I met you....isn't it always like that....its believed that when a soul has lived many life times it seeks out those that it was close to in a previous life....essentially "soul mates" was derived...keep him close! amazing honey.
Laura

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 21, 2006 07:15:06 AM Report
A beautiful statement of your love for him Adri, I really think that this will hit very close to home, if not dead on! Excellent!!    Henry
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 21, 2006 06:07:12 AM Report
Looks like you've managed to pull through this one o.k. it can be so frustrating at times, wonderful lines and full of emotion.
Comment By: TrialAnn on November 20, 2006 09:00:42 PM Report
Wonderful job. Glad you found the words again...:)


Comment By: FreeLinear Z on November 20, 2006 03:55:29 PM Report
Beautiful poem :-) I like how the meter (or pace or some technical term
about the flow of each line) changes, as if the poet is at diferent
times; spinning or running or flying.

Very cool :-D




Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on November 20, 2006 01:59:19 PM Report
So very beautiful, a dream that any heart would desire! :o)
Comment By: FreeGlata on November 20, 2006 01:17:27 PM Report
Ah,

Absolutely wonderful! I agree with Jim...if he doesn't love this, he's blind!

Love you, girl....

GG

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on November 20, 2006 12:49:11 PM Report
John will be so pleased, you came through writers block, and to produce another great poem. Well doen Adri!

 

LOPEZ X





 


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