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Comment By:  Dan J. Mazurek on March 4, 2016 12:35:37 PM |
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very well written from an experience that change one a favorite
dan
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Comment By:  Mary F. Charest on November 1, 2010 04:28:07 PM |
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| Intriguing piece. Award worthy. Mary
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| Comment By: Melody on March 11, 2010 10:09:29 AM |
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Reading this twice I tried to absorb each word and feeling projected. You have written a whirlwind of emotion with a talented pen. Awesome
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| Comment By: on March 8, 2010 12:03:19 AM |
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Absolutely LOVE the Imagery of this poem....Very deep....LOVED the story telling in it....Made me seem like I was there or it was me going through all of this....I LOVE writings like this....I have three new poems on here....if you will read n comment them.....One's called Love/Internal Rollercoaster.....the second one is called "Pick Me Up".....and the third one is called "Know Me".....Once again I say....I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this POEM......
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| Comment By: nanette on December 2, 2009 12:53:28 PM |
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Very nice work...Very inspiring...
Thank you for sharing...Congrats on the award...
Take care
Nanette
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| Comment By: Eric Siedzikowski on October 16, 2009 05:05:53 PM |
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Absolutely marvelous poem.Congratulations!!
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| Comment By: alisha on October 14, 2009 04:49:51 PM |
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i love it it has alot of emotion and power int he words i can feel the pain almost i love it! you totally diserved that reward.CONGRATULATIONS!.
NEVER SETTLE FOR LESS THAN YOU BEST.-alisha
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| Comment By: joey on September 24, 2009 11:10:00 AM |
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Very vivid poem you are a awsome poet
I think you should be published.
GREAT POEM congrats on the award
one of my favorites for sure
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| Comment By: LORETTA PITILLI on August 3, 2009 07:41:23 AM |
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living with the memories. peace, Loretta
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| Comment By: Barry Hodges on February 11, 2009 08:52:47 AM |
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In the still of the night some of one's remembered horrors come back and haunt one. I can certainly empathise there as I have had my full share of terror.
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| Comment By: Raymond Pinsonneault on September 1, 2008 10:42:29 AM |
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A nightmare indeed, temple knight, super wording well-arranged. CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE AWARD.
ps did you know that the pain of 1-2 & 3 degree burns can be felt but not after.
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| Comment By: Steve on April 17, 2008 07:33:53 AM |
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A great poem deserving of an award.
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| Comment By: oliver michael barrett on April 6, 2008 01:01:30 PM |
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truthly i think this poem is a little plain.
where is the meaning.
where is the heart.
it sounds as if im reading from a book.
some parts lacking creativity.
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| Comment By: Jose Noriega on April 5, 2008 07:31:50 PM |
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talented poem u got there with all congratulations to you even though its a little late
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| Comment By: Steve on February 27, 2008 12:28:44 PM |
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Great images.....the power of emotions jump off the page. Congratulations, great poem.
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| Comment By: Karen Lowrey on January 7, 2008 11:13:09 AM |
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What a creative imaginative change in reinventing oneself. Congratulation on your award your poem is well written and the verses stand clear to show the pictured imagery in the words your carefully choose! You have defiantly captured how your body grows stronger from pain and recovery and from wondering what you truly are and what you truly can be opening up your, "wings outstrected."
There are so many well written deserved comments that need to be posted in creative and I am glad that I have the chance to comment when comment is deserved. GREAT JOB!
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| Comment By: katie on September 6, 2007 11:06:38 PM |
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Very Beautiful, Very talented
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| Comment By: Tiffany on August 2, 2007 07:50:38 PM |
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LOVE IT!!!!!!
GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!
MUCH LOVE
*TIFFANY*
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| Comment By: Robin Constantinou on July 1, 2007 04:38:15 PM |
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very imaginative, and well written poem, beautiful work and well deserved on the award, bravo,
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| Comment By: Marian Mason on June 20, 2007 06:48:20 PM |
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What powerful imagry you have in this poem. Very well done on your award it is well desreved
Kind thoughts to you
Marian
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| Comment By: Marian Mason on June 20, 2007 06:48:16 PM |
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What powerful imagry you have in this poem. Very well done on your award it is well desreved
Kind thoughts to you
Marian
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| Comment By: Marian Mason on June 20, 2007 06:48:08 PM |
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What powerful imagry you have in this poem. Very well done on your award it is well desreved
Kind thoughts to you
Marian
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| Comment By: Rin Marie on April 30, 2007 01:47:52 PM |
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Congratulation on the award, you did an amazing job. You really deserve it.
Love, Rin
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| Comment By: Jessica on March 14, 2007 11:35:45 PM |
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Congrats on the Special Contest Award ! Well done!
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| Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on March 14, 2007 08:08:42 PM |
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Whooo Hoooo!! You got a Special Contest Award for this one. GREAT JOB. Congratulations! *SMILE* ~Pamela
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| Comment By: QuiltingLady on February 13, 2007 03:52:11 PM |
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Who knows what goes on inside a cocoon when a caterpiller changes into a butterfly, does it feel pain? The mystery of metamorphosis.
Congratulations on your much deserved award! :-)
Patty
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| Comment By: Ann on February 11, 2007 06:05:03 PM |
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Hey! Congratulations...I didn't even realize these were posted or else I would have said something sooner. Beautiful job!
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| Comment By: Moon Fairy on February 11, 2007 05:07:30 PM |
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My dear friend~
Sorry it took me so long to respond to your award!
I am beaming so bright!! SO HAPPY for you~
On your way my friend, your on your way.
AS~
Tracie
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on February 8, 2007 01:10:22 PM |
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Congrats on winning the special award Joe. I am soooooo glad you won..well deserved.
Helen
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| Comment By: Glata on February 8, 2007 10:06:30 AM |
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Wow, Joe...told ya you could do it!!! Congrats! A fitting winner, this is, and a very talented writer you are!
Hugs and big grins...
Glata
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| Comment By: Adri on February 7, 2007 05:57:13 AM |
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Oh my dear friend!!! YAY!!! Congratulations on this I am SO SO SO happy this one won!
Adri x
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| Comment By: Jeanne Dininni on February 6, 2007 10:45:38 PM |
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Deeply descriptive and highly emotional poem! Wonderful work! Congratulations on winning the Special Contest!
Wishing you continued success,
Jeanne
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| Comment By: Tana McCarthy on November 22, 2006 10:20:10 PM |
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Beautiful clarity and power of that last line, very intersting read.
Splendid, Icarus surviving the fall- 'man, you should'a tried the freefall'- the psyche waking. Under the tortured imagery this seems to me a paean of liberation. Just cancel those airline tickets.
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| Comment By: Adri on November 21, 2006 12:51:12 PM |
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Wow... Not a dream I would like to have, not that I would be able to put is to wonderfully in words like you in any way. Wonderfully writing, really a chilling write...
Adri x
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| Comment By: She Whispers on November 21, 2006 05:44:16 AM |
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Ltk, As I read I was thinking now this fears of shadows and demons that fly and seek lurking behind every thought and emotion..we wonder , where it will all end and who we really are after such a nightmare..awesome poem..I do hope you find your rest soon...> Hugs ~ She Whispers
The other of gray metallic feather light in weight
I stand up despite my pain with wings outstretched
Somehow as I feel pain my body grows stronger
Pain, recovery; pain, recovery; it goes on repeating
I stand alone in moonlight wondering what I truly am...
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| Comment By: Moon Fairy on November 21, 2006 12:06:29 AM |
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LTK~
Holy moses!...freaky nightmare, gave me the chills..
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