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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 7 Comments
Date Added: November 22, 2006 10:11:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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He said, she said - they said
He said, she said - they said;
One's right and one's wrong.
No love but anger instead;
Can't they just get along.
 
The tender bond is under fire,
Is there hope for this pair?
Being right the only desire;
Neither one thinks the other fair.
 
Communication breakdown,
No talking but yelling who's wrong.
Somebody has to calm down,
And try to help communication along...
 
Not really a question of wrong or right,
But the hurt feelings between them.
Lack of communication the cause for fight;
Lack of it everyday broke love's rhythm.
 
He said, she said - they said;
What's on their mind and heart.
Strong emotions sway from hate to love instead.
Back to the tender love they had from the start...
Author's Notes:
Communication, it works wonders in keeping a couple on the same page so that love can be strong.
Not really certain of the title, any suggestions would be appreciated.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on December 6, 2006 11:40:02 AM Report
Love is born...alas..love can die.
Many might disagree...I don't care :o)
Sometimes when there is such yelling and angst it tells you something is very basically wrong with the relationship.

Great write LTK...from the heart...pleasure to read~
Pamela

Comment By: on November 27, 2006 03:44:51 PM Report
I LIKE THIS POEM IT REMINDS ME OF ONE OF MY FRIENDS RELATIONSHIP WITH  HER BOYFRIEND!

 

LINZ

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 22, 2006 09:42:23 PM Report
You got that right, Joe..Without communication, the love withers on the vine..I think many times the lack of communication comes at the end of the fantasy honeymoon period, when the differences show up. I've found that if you have to work at a relationship it's usually because it's the wrong one...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 22, 2006 06:07:39 PM Report
The weapons of war in the battleground of words.. How well I know of the battles of the mind and heart..Title fits ...just find... Hugs ~ Scarlett
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 22, 2006 12:58:15 PM Report
This made for interesting reading as well as containing a great deal of truth, I'd leave the title as it grabs the imagination at first glance.
Comment By: FreeGlata on November 22, 2006 11:13:32 AM Report
That's how so many relationships die....for some reason or another, no one ever wants to admit that they might be wrong...or concede just to save the fight from happening. I hate conflict and will just let go of my stand if I can see that it's causing strife....

This is a good eye opener...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeAmanda on November 22, 2006 11:00:50 AM Report
Ooooooooooh, I like this alot, communication does wonders. =) I think the title fits too.

~Amanda





 


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