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Author Name: Freepenfold18 8 Comments
Date Added: November 24, 2006 10:11:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Take Me By The Hand.
Take me by the hand my child
And walk with me a while
Tell me all your secret fears
And those that make you smile
The ones that haunt you in the night
And ones that bring you pain
Ones that make you cry so much
And drive you half insane
I can take them all from you
If thats what you desire
Or you can keep them with you
And consume them all in fire
But if you take my hand my child
And say that you believe
We'll walk as one in paradise
And leave the others here to grieve.
 

 

Author's Notes:
Don't ask me, I have'nt got a clue, I just woke up with it in my head and wrote it down, and here it is.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 28, 2006 10:12:47 AM Report
Oh Graham ...you are priceless and anything you write has a special charm to it. It made me think of my daughter and how I wish I could take all her pain away.

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 28, 2006 08:02:02 AM Report
I wish I could wake up with something this great in MY mind...but lately all I wake up to is cobwebs on the brain....I can't seem to get inspired anymore....This is beautiful! Keep writing these waking thoughts down...they're great!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 26, 2006 05:19:58 PM Report
Wow this was magnificent reaching out to hold a hand that needs some tender love and to heal their pain simply wonderful.

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeNataly Hachem on November 25, 2006 04:21:42 AM Report
A wonderful, tender, inspiring poem. Hope you always wake up with a beautiful poem such as this to write down.

 

Nataly

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 25, 2006 01:27:17 AM Report

I felt a religious vibe here, as if God was taking the burdens of life from a troubled soul. I wake up with my head full of cobwebs so you are miles ahead of me. Nicely done Graham!


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeMandalynn on November 24, 2006 10:36:20 PM Report
wow, i most definitely wouldn't mind waking up with words like this stuck in my head. Great write.


-manda

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 24, 2006 01:41:41 PM Report
One hell of an inspiration and even a better write, NICE! Joe
Comment By: FreeJoe on November 24, 2006 11:56:06 AM Report
Splendid Graham, I don't think there is much more one can say. Joe




 


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