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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 4 Comments
Date Added: November 29, 2006 01:11:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Deaf to your amends
 

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From the moment the day begins
Through the night that never ends
I thought I had mastered
I
was deaf to your amends
I begged you for translation
What language does your heart speak
We were
just another failed contract
In this selfmade misery
Believing in the recollection
Everything we used to be
The flickering shadows of the candlelight
Listening to the words you've said tonight
Turbulence growing in my mind
With so many answers I try to find
Closures just a word to me
For my soul is never free

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on November 29, 2006 11:48:05 AM Report
Living in this seat Fletch I hear you and understand the pain in this write.

 

Magnificent loved it Huggles

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 29, 2006 07:57:11 AM Report
I think I've been in that seat myself a few times, hon....and I do understand the confusion and the desperate need to just get the mind straight...

An intense, gripping write, my friend...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on November 29, 2006 06:17:43 AM Report
There is so much pain wrapped up in these short lines.  I could feel the helplessness floating.  Excellent work.  ~Pam
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 29, 2006 05:17:46 AM Report
Closures just a word to me, for my soul is never free, Lines both deep and powerful and with impact, Excellent Fletch.




 


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