| Comment By: Lynn Cowman on September 23, 2007 09:35:03 AM
lovely emotion in this read :o)
| Comment By: Lubaina on January 21, 2007 04:40:24 AM
A delight to read and I thank you for sharing it with us.Touches the inner self like the cry of a dove..
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on December 3, 2006 01:26:37 AM
This is a lovely, heartfelt request, I doubt she will be able to refuse. =))
| Comment By: Joe Petro on December 2, 2006 07:35:49 PM
|Ah...Adri hit it on the nose. The passion and love flow through every word. Robert Browning would be proud. jp|
| Comment By: Adri on December 2, 2006 06:05:50 PM
Wow!!! What a lucky and happy woman this is written for... This is longing, passionate and full of love. I love this John, your words are phenomenal...
| Comment By: Joe on December 2, 2006 03:52:04 PM
|Magical words John, A very fine write. Joe|
| Comment By: She Whispers on December 2, 2006 03:27:32 PM
You do have a way about your style of writing that really seems to burn down deep inside who ever reads your love poem.. You are whispering so despertaly to a woman you desire...breathless you are with blinding smoke is your heart ...this is lovely to read.
.~ Hugs ~ She Whispers
(((I would taste that sweetness
that time has forbade me to have.
but in you I see
a fire that could burn
and would end the silence
that has forever made me empty