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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: December 02, 2006 14:12:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A moment of your time
A moment of your time



 



Give me one second



in your life



just that moment



and i would



explore



i would seek



i would hold you



and i would be in heaven.



i would taste that sweetness



that time has forbade me to have.



but in you i see



a fire that could burn



and would end the silence



that has forever made me empty.



 



 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 23, 2007 09:35:03 AM Report
lovely emotion in this read :o)

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeLubaina on January 21, 2007 04:40:24 AM Report
A delight to read and I thank you for sharing it with us.Touches the inner self  like the cry of a dove..

Warm thoughts.
Lubs.

 


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 3, 2006 01:26:37 AM Report

This is a lovely, heartfelt request, I doubt she will be able to refuse. =))


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on December 2, 2006 07:35:49 PM Report
Ah...Adri hit it on the nose. The passion and love flow through every word. Robert Browning would be proud. jp
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 2, 2006 06:05:50 PM Report

Wow!!!  What a lucky and happy woman this is written for...  This is longing, passionate and full of love.  I love this John, your words are phenomenal... 
Adri xx


Comment By: FreeJoe on December 2, 2006 03:52:04 PM Report
Magical words John, A very fine write. Joe
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 2, 2006 03:27:32 PM Report
John,
 You do have a way about your style of writing that really seems to  burn down deep inside who ever reads your love poem.. You are whispering so despertaly to  a woman you desire...breathless you are with blinding smoke is your heart ...this is lovely to read.
.~ Hugs ~ She Whispers 

(((I would taste that sweetness

that time has forbade me to have.

but in you I see

a fire that could burn

and would end the silence

that has forever made me empty





 


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