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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: December 02, 2006 16:12:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Longing

Longing




 




My heart whispers




But no one




Is listening.




I see a face that




Is hiding in the shadows




Of my emptiness.




I see a grace




Once written on your face




And the laughter




Of now an empty room.




Where I wait




For the day




When my life




Will spirit away




And take this soul




That once held you




                              So dearly.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJolanta Gradowicz on January 1, 2007 10:54:40 AM Report
It's touching, John. You expressed wonderfully the loneliness. Your stanzas appeal to me. I love the last lines. I feel some hope for the future...
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 3, 2006 02:12:43 PM Report
Don't surrender to the loneliness that you think, surrounds you. There's a heart inside of me, that will listen to the whisper of your voice.

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeJoe on December 3, 2006 06:25:28 AM Report
A fine write John, you have a remarkable way of expression. Joe
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 2, 2006 06:49:21 PM Report
Beautiful beyond words...  The words speak  to me John...  Your soul is in this and it is beautiful!!!!!!!  I love this.
Love Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 2, 2006 05:24:41 PM Report
John, I feel your heart and the unhappness your having at this time...we all wish for that love to come back... in time your heart will heal until then you will have a lot of days just like this...we are here for you my dear friend... We all do what we have to to just stay alive..
My thoughts and hugs to you in this time of sorry...Love  ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeAngel on December 2, 2006 04:52:47 PM Report
Beautiful touching write John. I can feel the pain and emptiness through your words. Hugs just a pm away if you ever need a friend

 

Love Angelxx





 


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