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Author Name: Freequeens1 2 Comments
Date Added: December 13, 2006 12:12:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Life and Love-Double Triolet
New Wife
 
The sun comes up and then goes down,
My world goes round and round and round.
I wore a yellow wedding gown.
The sun comes up and then goes down.
My good groom was dressed all in brown,
Rose petals lay strewn on the ground.
The sun comes up and then goes down,
My world goes round and round and round.
 
Old Wife
 
The sun comes up and then goes down,
My world goes round and round and round.
The bride wore a gold wedding gown.
The sun comes up and then goes down.
My widower was dressed in brown,
As I lay buried in the ground.
The sun comes up and then goes down,
My world goes round and round and round.
 
 
Author's Notes:

I came up with the second verse first and a chill went up my spine, so I had to write it down.  I don't know where it came from, it just took on a life of it's own.  Life and love continues even after death.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on December 13, 2006 08:12:47 PM Report
Very creative verse Patty~
I liked this write..
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 13, 2006 12:32:05 PM Report
Very nicely done, I'm impressed! :o)




 


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