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Comment By:  Robert Smith on March 8, 2008 09:14:29 AM |
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Do you have bad days? once I seen the award at the top of the page, I just knew it was going to be a cracker. Thought provoking and brave - Rob
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| Comment By: Antony Frank on February 17, 2007 10:32:08 AM |
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Well deserved award. Excellent! Into my favourites.
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| Comment By: Ross McCague Rosco on February 8, 2007 11:03:52 PM |
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Along this one way street or Down this one way street.
These are really good! Damn.
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| Comment By: Goliath Assassin on February 3, 2007 03:38:38 AM |
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My Siren's songs coldly cryptic,
Yet, forever in my ears.
O' Enchantress apocalyptic,
Risen from malignant tears.
I can see why you got an award for this.
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| Comment By: Cynthia Jones on January 21, 2007 10:22:25 AM |
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Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds
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| Comment By: Jeff on January 17, 2007 03:28:55 PM |
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Glad to see this poem rewarded...very deserving.
Jeff
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| Comment By: Lady Literary on January 15, 2007 11:51:34 PM |
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I don't know what floors me more, Jolen....Your way with words, or people's reaction to them. I love reading both your poems and the comments left behind. Look at how you inspire and affect people. That's a hell of an accomplishment. Congratulations on a very much deserved gold.
Lit
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on January 15, 2007 06:11:17 PM |
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Miss Sorceress: another incredible write --- another Feature Poem Award......
Lady D
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| Comment By: Dori on January 15, 2007 05:30:44 PM |
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Once again, I find myself readin first to enjoy the rhythm, then again to enjoy the matter.
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| Comment By: James Thomas Whitworth on January 15, 2007 03:27:52 AM |
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Hey, you there, congratulations!
You look good in gold, princess; matches those eyes of ours.
James, proud of my sexetary.
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| Comment By: Adri on January 15, 2007 02:30:11 AM |
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Well well... what can we say... you know what we can say... lol Congrats my J!!! Great write!
Your SideKick,
Juicy Girl x
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on January 14, 2007 10:49:19 PM |
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I'm sure glad to see this win an award. Congratulation.
Helen
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| Comment By: S on January 3, 2007 03:59:55 PM |
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well written, really liked this poem
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| Comment By: Chuck on January 1, 2007 06:06:13 PM |
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I was looking for myself once...only to find me looking for myself...it was strange experience. I like this one.
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on December 31, 2006 05:59:42 AM |
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excellent depiction of the duality of our inner natures...well thats how it read to me.
Ali x
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| Comment By: Jeff on December 29, 2006 01:59:52 PM |
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Excellent write...
Different style for you, but I really liked it.
Jeff
Happy New Years
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| Comment By: Samuel E. Stone on December 23, 2006 05:37:46 PM |
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a very interesting and captivating piece...enjoyed the read...
Sam
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Comment By:  Joe McNinney on December 22, 2006 06:58:42 PM |
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So many different styles you show us Sorceress, each one is incredible. This is just terrific, Joe
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| Comment By: Pelagic Mind on December 21, 2006 08:36:22 AM |
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It’s an inspired piece posted under "nature", the nature of people? Well perhaps, but it succeeds in separating that irresistible drive in all of us from our “sensible self” intellect...Especially when we know what we are doing is self destructive... As Len says below you have come a long way, and this is a remarkable poem….
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| Comment By: James Thomas Whitworth on December 17, 2006 10:03:48 PM |
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Though this is not done in your usual style, you, once again, show yourself to be a perfect mistress of the written word.
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| Comment By: Angel on December 17, 2006 04:28:40 AM |
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Amazing wonderful write J
Love Angelxx
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on December 16, 2006 12:50:24 AM |
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Not bad, for a rookie...
Hadda come back for a third read. Niiiicccccceeee ....Yereverlovinfurball
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on December 16, 2006 12:18:09 AM |
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Facing oneself is scary...the sooner it's done the better. How well you write my friend.
Helen
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| Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on December 15, 2006 09:11:44 PM |
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Wow. This is excellent work my friend. The last two lines - perfection! Very introspective and revealing. I loved it. ~Pam
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| Comment By: Adri on December 15, 2006 08:31:07 PM |
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OH.MY.SOUL!!! You just have this way... This way to make ordinary words sounds like songs of angels... I am speechless. I am with John, I bow you your brilliance.a
Love
Juicy Girl x
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on December 15, 2006 05:27:44 PM |
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"My Siren's songs coldly cryptic
Yet, forever ringing in my ears.
O' enchantress! boldly apocalyptic,
Risen from her cocoon of malignant tears."
That's what I call poetry!! This is so imaginitive, Aces. At the risk of slobbering, this makes a strong impact because of the original subject of being torn between two opposite, undeniable forces and the sheer beauty of the wording..You've come a loooong way, baby! :O)..Yereverlovinfurball
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| Comment By: timetrain on December 15, 2006 05:15:15 PM |
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Gorgeous, It's got something about it which really attracts me to it, as with all your amazing poems.
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| Comment By: Linear Z on December 15, 2006 04:48:05 PM |
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Beautiful. It’s clear, concise and simple, yet still elegant
and engaging. As always you have excelled yourself. Bless you for sharing these
words, that you have, written down, in such a great, order.
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| Comment By: Last Temple Knight on December 15, 2006 02:32:13 PM |
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Human nature explored on such a personal level... I bow to your skill.
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| Comment By: Joe Petro on December 15, 2006 02:13:50 PM |
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Where do you come up with this stuff! The eternal struggle with one's self has been written about before....BUT NOT LIKE THIS. This relatively short piece zooms the reader through images and emotions. No answers at the end, just the experience of the ride. jp
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| Comment By: The Mystic Poet on December 15, 2006 01:33:37 PM |
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LOL, I am sooo glad you are posting more! It has been way to long. How cruel of thee to have deprived us little lambs of your shinning talent!
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| Comment By: Chuck on December 15, 2006 01:26:10 PM |
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Oh the pain and the suffering…it’s great to be alive… what are we so damn afraid of anyway?... of course the answer to that is… ourselves… and for me…this is a beautiful picture of that very feeling… fantastic!
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on December 15, 2006 12:04:13 PM |
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Miss Sorceress: GREAT write...........quite a pair (doting saint and wanton whore) !!
Lady D
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| Comment By: Ross McCague Rosco on December 15, 2006 10:23:31 AM |
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If I were in the witness box, as I often am, I would say the saint/whore dichotomy is one that is front and centre in the male mind, with the exception of the gentile owner of this site who is blissfully transcendent of "the rag and bone shop of the heart". However, for the average bloke, it's the club and the pew, the cradle and the grave, the lover and the mistress, the stern countenance and the wily peak, and so on and so forth. Carl Jung suggested we were half way between whatever position we posited and its opposite. I don't argue too much with smarter people, especially when they speak German and I am trying to face my murderous self.
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| Comment By: Ross McCague Rosco on December 15, 2006 10:17:44 AM |
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Perhaps it should be wanton witch. That was what your username was and it's more fitting unless bravado is the operative here. I know you have a dual system of language that doesn't weight the words the same way in the dom/sub mode, however..... I have to think.
Smashing if I do say so myself.
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| Comment By: Glata on December 15, 2006 10:05:04 AM |
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Absolutely amazing, J! Your expression...the feelings of being torn between who you are and who people expect you to be...the struggles to be YOU. Positively fantastic!
Loved the way this flowed and love the stark clarity revealed..
Oh, and LOVE YOU TOO! hehe
Hugs...
Glata
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| Comment By: Henry M. on December 15, 2006 10:01:25 AM |
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I LOVE THIS!!! Jody, this was pure excellence, I am in awe!! This has everything, great flow, rhyming meter and description. Bravo Jody! Henry
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