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Author Name: Freeleahlopez 11 Comments
Date Added: December 19, 2006 11:12:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Entangled Emotions

I am lost

Alone

And confused

Forever entangled in a web

I call,

Life

Reaching for that love

That once was

Tears that plea

For a second chance

Eyes that see

The love of a man

So clear to the eye

But my heart bleeds

With emotions,

Released from my soul

To feel,

But I back away

When given chance

To reveal

The love inside of me

That wants to be seen
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Comments:
Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 30, 2016 12:39:29 PM Report

unless we dive in we will never know how deep.

                                                                  John

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on March 21, 2013 07:34:29 PM Report


Not easy to wear your heart out on your sleave. You capture the spirit of the thing very well, Leah. You are a fine poet.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on December 30, 2006 10:47:04 AM Report
I love how you open  your heart and let it flow onto the page here. Trust is so very difficult to find sometimes. I think we all have been in this place one time or another. Great expression LL.

~Cindy

Comment By: Freeanthony bennett on December 26, 2006 02:31:47 PM Report
wow

well done.

I think you have a new fan.




Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on December 25, 2006 07:19:46 AM Report
I like this a lot Leah, nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeS on December 20, 2006 05:58:20 PM Report
i really like the message in the poem, and i love the final line.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on December 20, 2006 05:40:35 AM Report
So full of heartache and sadness Leah, and yes it makes you wary of where to place your heart again, but don't let it ruin your future some one waits for you somewhere, if you don't look you won't find. another wonderful write though.
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on December 19, 2006 03:04:02 PM Report
I hear your bleeding heart...sometimes being alone helps us find our way.

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 19, 2006 02:17:38 PM Report
A tangled web the heart does weave...  I wish you luck in your life's journey.

LTK

Comment By: FreeJoe on December 19, 2006 02:10:39 PM Report
Your heart is revealed in this sad write Leah, a lot of feeling is felt through these words. A fantastic write, your style is unique. Joe
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 19, 2006 11:48:51 AM Report
Wonderful write.  The emotion is dripping off the words here.  Great one dear!  Just look after your heart.
Adri x





 


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