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Author Name: Freedyoung 2 Comments
Date Added: December 20, 2006 16:12:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Back Under
Stop.  Breath.  Abide.
This feeling, too, will pass.
Concentrate on the knot inside.
Let it go.  Relax.
 
There is a heat in my head
And a feeling of drowning in my chest.
When I close my eyes, the dark is red.
I need reprieve.  I need rest.
 
So I fight my way to the surface;
Clawing at each shred of wonder.
I look to you.  Look for hope in your face.
But you lazily push me back under.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freebloodtear on December 22, 2006 12:51:16 PM Report
this was a very sad write. the desperation built up and then just was shot down in t he ending, very well written with a nice flow. all the best n merry christmas
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on December 21, 2006 08:39:42 AM Report
Oh ouch. This ending hurt deeply.  A fine work filled with dark emotion and need.  Well done. ~Pam




 


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