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Author Name: FreeGoliath Assassin 4 Comments
Date Added: December 28, 2006 14:12:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Untouchable

 

I once had a map to the Land of Love

But there’s thieves on this road, you see...

Some cute little girl with the greenest eyes

Come took it away from me…

 

And it matters not how polite I am now

I’m invisible to every last one…

This grand suit of armor so easily used

To fell evil has now lost its fun…

 

All this armor around me… so much power surrounds me…

And I’m LONELY!!!

My own freedom confounds me, as the reasons run ‘round me…

AND I AM LOOONLEY!!!

 

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!

I AM UNTOUCHABLE!

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!!

I AM UNLOVABLE!

 

I awoke this morning dreading the thought

Of waking up to my own mum…

But alas, the day that I’d moved away

I’d forgotten had already come…

 

And I lay there to ponder the feeling I felt.

It wasn’t relief, and nor was it fright…

But I oddly found myself wondering

If morning eggs would still be worth the fight…

 

All this armor around me… so much power surrounds me…

And I’m LONELY!!!

My own freedom confounds me, ALL THESE REASONS, THEY HOUND ME!

AND I’M LOOONLEY!!!

 

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!

I AM UNTOUCHABLE!

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!!

I AM UNLOVABLE!

 

I HAVE FORGOTTEN HOW TO JUST GET ALONG

IN THIS WORLD WITHOUT CAUSING A STIR!

I HAVE FORGOTTEN HOW TO SIT AND REST FOR AWHILE…

I KICKED MY OWN COMFORT TO THE CURB!

 

IT’S NOT AN EASY THING TO BE COMPLETELY COMMITTED

TO THE FRUITION OF ALL YOUR DREAMS!

BUT ONCE YOU FINALLY DO, THEN SEE, THE JOKE’S ON YOU!

NOBODY UNDERSTANDS SUCH PASSION, IT SEEMS!

 

IS THERE ANYONE IN THIS WORLD I CAN TURN TO

TO GIVE ME WHAT MY ARMOR DENIES?

IS THERE ANYWHERE A WOMAN WITH THE COURAGE

TO STOKE THE FLAMES OF PASSION BURNING IN MY EYES?

 

FOR THIS INFERNO IS FIERCE, AND IT KNOWS NO MERCY

FOR ANY OF ITS ENEMIES!

BUT IT IS NOT ETERNAL!  AND THE FUEL THAT IT NEEDS

IS A PRECIOUS COMODITY!

 

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!

I AM UNTOUCHABLE!

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!!

I AM UNLOVABLE!

 

All this armor around me… so much power surrounds me…

And I’m LONELY!!!

My own freedom confounds me, as the reasons THEY POUND ME!!!

AND I AM LOOONLEY!!!

 

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!

I AM UNTOUCHABLE!

I AM THE GOLIATH ASSASSIN!!

I AM UNLOVABLE!

 

Gather around me now, all you un-disciplined fools…

And have a laugh at the three-foot boy…

Who dresses in paint cans and swings around with a stick…

Saying one day, he’ll be “the savior of this troubled land”…

 

…For what is there ever grand… about a wanna'-be hero…

With no opportunity… to fight for a woman’s hand?

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 16, 2007 12:10:15 AM Report
Well armor does that..make you lonely.  Great write.

 

Helen

Comment By: Freeleroy taylor fiddler lyon on January 12, 2007 02:19:26 AM Report
  man you have real ******* talent

Comment By: FreeTobi on December 30, 2006 02:44:46 PM Report
And so the armor that protects, binds as well. It is time to let it go, and let David reign supreme!!  Then you will see how fast your heart is found!

Comment By: FreeAdri on December 29, 2006 02:45:27 AM Report

Firstly, WOW...  You are a brilliant song writer!  I am no expert in song writing, but what my limited knowledge tells me about it, is that this is brilliant. 
Secondly, WOW...  So much raw emotion and raw passion are cut to the bone and shown freely.  You have the desire in you and the passion; you must just let it go.  With so much passion and emotion the armor is bound to dent...  Great write David!  I truly love this. 
Adri x






 


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