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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 10 Comments
Date Added: December 29, 2006 13:12:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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It began with a birth... -- An Alphabetic Link Acrostic
A long time ago it began with a birth
Birth of a child God had chosen
Chosen one to be man's savior, his destiny
Destiny filled with many miracles enormous
Enormous his role to play in man's fate
Fate destined and watched over by God
God almighty, a new age his son would herald
Herald bold news, no longer whorship idols
Idols of gold, he let it be known was not just
Just believe in the one true God, heaven known
Known to be hated by those self appointed to lead
Lead the nation, selfish men hungry for more
More could see the corruption high in numbers
Numbers of believers grew high at the miracles observed
Observed by many with questions they did ponder
Ponder not for long, answers received to questions
Questions no more, faith was indeed raised
Raised higher also in those who followed the savior
Savior who was a humble servent and teacher
Teacher of peace, love, and understanding
Understanding each other despite resistance verily
Verily it came to pass his destiny fate did weave
Weave together the fate of all mankind xtry
Xtry was Jesus' sacrifice for old and young
Young life ended to save all, a martyr with zeal
Zeal to save all mankind for his father God Almighty
Author's Notes:
A poem I had written before Christmas but didn't have a chance to post until today.
It's also my first attempt at trying to combine these three forms ~ Link poetry, Acrostic, and Alphabetic (not sure who invented it though, but wanted to give it a try).
I know it needs some work so let me know what you think ~ any and all suggestions are welcome!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKathleen Rau on December 4, 2007 10:27:38 AM Report
i like it
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 3, 2007 01:20:39 PM Report
Wow Joe! This one is very impressive! Great work in combining three styles...it's more than I could tackle!

The Christmas story put wonderfully clear...

Hugs and wow!

glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 30, 2006 11:17:39 PM Report
VERY tricky stuff, Joe..Abd a great declaration of faith, to boot..Well done!!...len
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 30, 2006 09:32:59 AM Report
Oh you are brilliant and this is clever and so inventive!!  I love this.  Done wonderfully Joe.  This is just wonderful.  I am also standing and applauding. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 30, 2006 09:30:30 AM Report
Joe, Wow... this is brillent to say the least.. You always amaze me
a Masterpiece !! *****
"Happy New Year"  Hugs~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on December 29, 2006 06:40:49 PM Report
Wow!  This was very good and hard to write!  Well done.

 

CeeCee

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on December 29, 2006 03:41:36 PM Report
Bravo Bravo Bravo  I am standing in applause at this wonderful labor of love.  What a wonderful piece.  The best ABC's out there.  Well done.  This is such a difficult for and to have mastered it with flair as you have done is exceptional.  A pleasure to have read this today. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on December 29, 2006 02:39:06 PM Report
This is amazing!  Never before have I seen the life of Christ summed up so succinctly.  It is so clearly expressed, anyone can understand it.

Patty

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 29, 2006 02:38:46 PM Report
This is very very good.  Those are three interesting styles to link!!!!

 

 

Lady D -- needs more coffee

Comment By: FreeRoger on December 29, 2006 01:28:25 PM Report
WOW!  Very intereting!  I've read acrostic, I've read link poetry... never have I read both AND in alphabetical order.  Acrostic is so difficult.  This is a great subject AND a great read, thank you.

--R





 


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