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Author Name: Freejohncarter 10 Comments
Date Added: December 31, 2006 02:12:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Memories

Memories



 



Like the leaves



In an Autumn breeze



Which dance and play and



Gather in the corners



Of our windswept minds.



Like the snow of Winter



That lays in silence



On a sleeping land.



Two lovers dancing



In the April rain



Loving each other



Again and again.



I have bathed in your sunshine



I have been soaking wet



and the memories I have



I will never forget.



 



 

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Comments:
Comment By: Freetasmia on January 30, 2007 01:57:32 AM Report
Completely enchanting...amazing imagery....
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 3, 2007 12:47:35 PM Report
Nice descriptive write of memories..well done

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 2, 2007 12:47:34 AM Report
What a descriptive gathering of memories. Very nice work John.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on January 1, 2007 09:26:08 AM Report
Dear John-
Life fills our mental scrapbooks to full capasity
Balanced between all things that has to be

These pages that write out my destiny

Death leaves no more than a memory-

I like poetry that can engage my mind well enough
to make me think-
The description in thi was great-
Best Wishes~
Peace~
James

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 1, 2007 12:33:06 AM Report
I've been all wet too many times to remember..:O)...Romantic stuff, John..len
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 31, 2006 11:01:26 AM Report
Beautiful...  We will be nothing without our memories...  Love this my dear friend!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 31, 2006 10:27:59 AM Report
John, So many memories we make in a life time so many both good and bad... This poem really tugs at my heart so very much.. Your awesome my dear friend.. "Happy New Year"
Hoping you have a wonderful new year with hopes and happiness,
.Hugs and Love ~She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on December 31, 2006 10:25:43 AM Report
Memories can truly build our inner beauty.  What a beautiful piece you have written.  Just a pleasure to read and enjoy. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeLubaina on December 31, 2006 06:48:48 AM Report
This leaves me in awwwwww....Well done and thank you for sharing this one.Your style of poetry is lovely and you haveincredible talent.A nice poem to come home and read first thing....I wish you and yours a very happy holiday season and a Happy New Year!  

Lubs.

Comment By: FreeDavid Rojas on December 31, 2006 02:47:24 AM Report

Brilliant metaphors and exquisite word use.


Reading this again and again invokes a somber emotion to sublime for words. But perhaps a poem could be written about this poem. People are suckers for contradiction.


 


I love this write


-Rojas






 


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