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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 14 Comments
Date Added: January 01, 2007 03:01:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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What is a Wish
Wishes and dreams, the list is too long For every wish that we have, another is born. The first wish is now ready to be torn. for the second is greater, a bigger desire and each wish we wish for continues to expire. So we dream, continue to wish, for it takes us to places our mind hasn't been therefore, we continue to dream   If we wished and wishes came true we'd run out of wishes and things to do   Wishing upon a star. A penny in the well. these are the pleasures we tell. So what would happen when wishes are real? What then would we ponder, What would we feel? Do we want these wishes to end? Would life have such interest with roads that don't bend? So lets place that wish back on that star, Where lovers can dream, and poets can write.   And wishes are that what wishes should be A dream and a wish for you and me WISHES
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Comment By: FreeSteve on June 2, 2008 09:32:00 PM Report
Very nice, I wish I had read this sooner. 
Comment By: FreeStarr on February 20, 2007 06:17:04 PM Report
If only some wishes did come true but then again I would probably get into too much trouble. lol. Loved it!!

Starr

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 30, 2007 10:46:49 AM Report
Very thought provoking poem, very interesting and well written!
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 29, 2007 05:13:44 PM Report

Simply true and beautiful.....no "penny's" in the well please :).


I wish for something with every passing day. Thank God they all don't


come true...I would be in lots of trouble here :).


I love this write dear Lady. You rock!!


~Penny~


Comment By: FreeAngel on January 29, 2007 04:21:31 PM Report
Wishes hopes and aspirations are what keeps us going in life for without them we would become only a shell of ourselves. I do believe some wishes and spells come true for sure....

Excellent write

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeLexi on January 19, 2007 03:55:34 PM Report
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's me again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great Write (like always)!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keeping ya in my prayers!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Sweet prayers Lexi

 

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 9, 2007 12:26:55 PM Report
I have my own theories about whether wishes come true and how to go about it but overall thats a long story.

 

Good revellation of how we fail to find satisfaction in the outer things

Ali x

Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on January 5, 2007 02:12:03 AM Report
As the wise person once said be carefull what you wish for you may just get it. If wishes came true I think it would be then end of the poets dream as it is. And the passion in life would no longer be. Excellent words my friend..!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 4, 2007 06:38:24 PM Report
Great topic of the week, Helen..I wish I may...I wish I might...len
Comment By: FreeS on January 4, 2007 12:26:52 PM Report
pretty good, i wish that you would really explain what you felt a wish was, it seemed like you were going to at the end but its lacking in substance, overall i really did like the poem

 

- recalcitrant

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on January 2, 2007 10:39:56 PM Report
Beautiful beyond words!

Absolutely fantastic.....

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on January 2, 2007 10:43:55 AM Report
Well penned Helen.

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 2, 2007 01:06:54 AM Report
Wishes would only be heavenly if they were all good ones...but just imagine the havoc in the world if ALL wishes came true, I'm sure just as many off colored wishes would be made as honorable ones. This is good food for thought.

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 1, 2007 09:44:02 AM Report
What a very pretty poem from your gentle heart..All the wishes we could have.... Have a great new year Lady..
Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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