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Author Name: PremiumMLAllen 13 Comments
Date Added: January 07, 2007 08:01:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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YOU MOVE ME
Snow melts on the mountain top, finds the path of least resistance, joins a stream splashing, gaily, it would seem, over rocks, down the mountainside, dazzling in the sunlight.  At last, it finds a river deep, moving, always moving onward to the sea.
 
So you move my spirit.  Like a river deep, dark, and slowly, but surely moving onward, you draw from me emotions I didn't know were there; dark, strong emotions.  Like the ocean wide, sometimes calm, glistening in the light of sun or moon, and sometimes wildly thrashing, upheaving, you guide the ebb and flow of my life.  I wonder if you know how much you move me.
Author's Notes:

For Mama.  I wrote this in October of 2006.  Mama died January 1, 2007.  mla

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on April 30, 2008 05:02:01 AM Report
Exquisitely written, like always. 
Congratulations on the award.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 29, 2008 11:46:56 PM Report
I love this! Congratulations on your award~
Sorry for your loss Mary Lou, your Mother is smiling proudly.
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeSteve on April 28, 2008 01:58:22 PM Report
Excellent poem, such real emotions.  Congratulations.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 28, 2008 09:55:34 AM Report
Mary Lou:  such a lovely poem for your beautiful Mom.   She is so proud of the Feature Poem Award for this write.  

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 28, 2008 03:35:57 AM Report
Your work shines. Truly heartfelt

Excellent expression.

Well deserved award.

Yours ....Fletch

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on January 18, 2007 12:46:56 PM Report
Look for little nuances here and there. She'll be around. A lovely lovely piece. jp
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on January 18, 2007 01:14:20 AM Report






Mary Lou, this is an excellent way to show your love to your mom.  She evidently did an excellent job raising and loving you.  I enjoyed the poem and was taking it in a completely different way while reading it, but when I read you note about your mom it made even more sense to me.  A great job and a great tribute!

Damon

p.s. Sorry about your mom.


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 9, 2007 08:06:49 PM Report
I can tell this lady means a lot to you..I say means, instead of meant, because I believe, down to my toenails that waht we percieve to be death is moving on to a relm we will all share..Beautifl write, Teach..len
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 9, 2007 12:24:31 AM Report
So sorry for your loss...What a beautiful dedication to your mother...She moves you and this poem moved me.

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeJeff on January 8, 2007 03:14:16 PM Report
So very moving....

I so sorry for your loss.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeAdri on January 8, 2007 08:14:26 AM Report
Oh...  As I was reading this, over and over, the tears just rolled.  This is so unbelievably beautiful.  It moved me, and I can almost feel longing in this, but also so much admiration and love. This is truly one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read, or have moved me so much...  
Adri x 

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 8, 2007 08:09:28 AM Report
Very moving realisation of the deep bond and relationships we have with our mothers. Complex and challenging many times but also enriching and soul enhancing. I give thanks for your mama ML She did a fine job on you.

 

Ali x

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 7, 2007 08:53:57 AM Report
This is most beautiful dear. I am so sorry for the loss of your Mother.

 My heart goes out to you. Your tenderness is painted so beautifully

 across your page dear. I know your Mother is proud.

 God Bless,

~Penny~






 


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