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Author Name: Freequeens1 13 Comments
Date Added: January 11, 2007 21:01:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Never Satisfied-Villanelle
Never Satisfied
 
Greed, as old as mankind,
Even from the babe suckling at the breast.
Why is satisfaction so hard to find?
 
What must we have in mind
When we grasp at everything like a quest?
Greed, as old as mankind.
 
When it comes to things refined,
They all say moderation is best.
Why is satisfaction so hard to find?
 
Craving power, money or to be wined and dined,
One of the seven sins you don't want to invest.
Greed, as old as mankind.
 
In hindsight we see that we were blind,
To have over indulged with so much zest.
Why is satisfaction so hard to find?
 
Greed can strain the ties that bind.
It robs the family of its vested interest.
Greed, as old as mankind,
Why is satisfaction so hard to find?
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
I wanted to try out the style Villanelle.  The rhyme scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.  The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughtout the poem, and appear together in the last two lines.
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 12:44:43 PM Report
oh and congrats on the award, well deserved

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 12:44:27 PM Report
never tried such a stanza, dont think it would suit me anyway, i see the way it is portrayed very well here, very powerful and beautifull written
~Robin

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on March 26, 2007 01:54:31 AM Report
I love this form. I love the poem. Congrats on the award. Great work.

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 15, 2007 07:12:50 PM Report
Congrats on the award, very well deserved and impressive! :o)
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on January 24, 2007 08:46:47 AM Report
Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 23, 2007 08:06:56 PM Report
The green-eyed monster is living in us all..It is only circumstance that brings it out..Fine write..len
Comment By: FreeAdri on January 22, 2007 04:08:32 AM Report
Oh I am so glad this won!!  A BRILLIANT complex piece.  Congratulation on a very very well deserved award.  Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 21, 2007 07:48:12 PM Report
Congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.  Very nicely done...

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on January 20, 2007 08:56:34 PM Report
Ahhh, nicely done with the Villanelle.  I love this form and I loved this piece.  Some very good questions here.  Well done.  Welcome aboard.  Looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Pam 
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 13, 2007 02:20:59 PM Report
Truly wonderful, great poem on the topic of the week!

The Villanelle style is truly amazing, you did great work with it!

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 12, 2007 11:40:07 AM Report
Great topic of the week..why is satisfaction so hard to find..good question..

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 12, 2007 10:07:46 AM Report
Excellent work indeed.
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 12, 2007 08:37:49 AM Report

I think you combined the style with the topic of the week wonderfully! Greed...what a great inspiration, huh? It's something that the entire world is smothered with.


Hugs  and smiles!
Glata






 


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