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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: January 13, 2007 10:01:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Finale

Finale



 



As I walk these rooms



In silent tears



I think of all



The distant years.



Echoing laughter



Childrens tears



Adolessence!



Growing fears.



We saw them both



Through this and more



As I wander through



Another door.



For the times



I was blind to your needs



When all I saw



Was my wants.



For the days



When you were down



And I pushed you further



I am sorry.



The changes that took place



In our lives



Cannot erase or take away



The ghostly memories



That now walk these rooms.



 



               



 



 



 



 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on January 14, 2007 11:20:54 AM Report
Oh John, this is fantastic!  I love this.  You really wrote a piece of brilliance here.  WONDERFUL John! 
Adri x
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 13, 2007 11:44:16 AM Report
Life is one great big lesson isn't it? sometimes we have to learn the hard way. Very good poem on Changes my friend

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 13, 2007 11:15:12 AM Report
John, ...Oh we do pay for our mistakes in many ways.. all the long days and longer nights.... in the shadowed rooms of distant days.. Hugs and love ..my dear friend.. ~ She Whispers




 


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