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Author Name: Freequeens1 6 Comments
Date Added: January 13, 2007 16:01:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sin Perfected-Tanka
Sin Perfected
 
Working on the list
Of the seven deadly sins,
Overachievers
Take it as a real challenge
To perfect each one in turn.
 
 
Author's Notes:
Tanka is another form of Japanese poetry (5,7,5,7,7) syllables.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 8, 2007 11:28:21 PM Report
I love thiss tribute to perfecting sin!!! Tanka you-a very much-a for-a posting-a this...len
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 16, 2007 09:01:18 PM Report
Very interesting form of poetry, and you have pegged many people that I know! Great work!

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on January 16, 2007 06:54:28 PM Report
Intriguing.  I once thought to make an album on the seven sins...
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 15, 2007 11:33:52 AM Report
Very good and yes very clever.

 

Helen

Comment By: TrialAnn on January 13, 2007 05:33:12 PM Report
Clever write and nice form!


Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on January 13, 2007 04:34:01 PM Report

Nicely penned.
Randy






 


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