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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 25 Comments
Date Added: January 15, 2007 09:01:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Heated Love

I feel the heat
of your body naked
next to mine,
as a sweet midnight breeze
brushes over our glowing souls;
our hands entwined. 

I feel your touch as
your hands stroke,

over me,
following the contours
of my body bare. 

The burning trail
your touch bestowed
on a journey of discovery
awakes the passion,
opens the need,
to explore our ecstasy
in answering our hunger
for us,
our need.

I feel your skin
hot upon mine, touch,
as your body covers me whole.

And all that I feel you clear.
Without you even being close or near…

A thousand miles away you are,
but my bed each nigh you share with me.
The power of our love is true
I feel it every night with you…   

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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on May 18, 2010 05:27:48 AM Report
Adri, This is wonderful and so very very good.  I love it.  Damon
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on July 5, 2009 01:10:23 PM Report
Adri -  This is a superb example of poetry that is erotic without being profane.  I like the illusory quality,

where your imagination completes the picture.  Well Done.




Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 12, 2008 04:06:16 PM Report
I've read several of your poems and I'm truly impressed by your talent. It's not easy to write pieces that have that "matter of fact, yet sensitive" style.I'll check back soon.
Take care.

Comment By: FreeSteve on June 30, 2008 12:23:42 PM Report
This is charged with emotions and explodes off the page with serious heat.
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 30, 2008 12:18:45 PM Report
This is charged with emotions and explodes off the page with serious heat.
Comment By: FreeMaretha on March 18, 2008 02:39:43 AM Report
Lovely, HOT, evocative
Comment By: FreeMichael Salyers on January 7, 2008 11:25:07 AM Report
I like this one BUT long distance love sucks royally . Been there once , will never do that again . I agree with some of the other comments about this being a rather heated post . You do have a wonderful way with words . I will read and post mpre later , as for now ..... i think I need a cold shower .... LMAO
Comment By: Freeabby on September 17, 2007 09:37:54 AM Report
The power of love is beyond comprehension.

Love transcends distance and merge hearts

whatever the divide.


Comment By: Freesanddancer on June 8, 2007 04:37:15 PM Report
Very sensuous and heartfelt. A well-written piece. What was that you told me about being more of a reader than a writer. Pff...
Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on May 17, 2007 03:46:30 AM Report
wow, your almost as bad as jolen (by bad I mean good lol). The screen fogged over from this write!
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on February 11, 2007 12:02:35 PM Report
What a superb description of hottests of emotions prevailing into the breast deep...!!! Very nice and deep love poem that can be shared with spouse and beloved...
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 31, 2007 03:19:43 AM Report
Its all been said already except I know that it can be like this even if the object of your desire is far away.........

deliciously erotic. Ali x PS you new pic is lovely!

Comment By: Freetasmia on January 30, 2007 01:56:10 AM Report

Very beautiful..u invoke the right concoction of passion with a subtle n sweet beauty...loved reading this one...

Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on January 26, 2007 07:41:55 PM Report
Lovely, purely desire and love. Amazing Adri!

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on January 26, 2007 05:32:13 AM Report
Hey Adri, these just get hotter. I can see that man of yours is going to have his hands full.
A couple of small things - 'Sooth' should be 'Soothe' with no need of the comma afterwards, and 'nigh' towards the end, I assume, should be 'night'.

Comment By: FreeChristopher on January 24, 2007 05:22:03 AM Report

I do, as well as always will, love your work.

-You inspire me


Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 19, 2007 06:25:11 PM Report
Very sensual and tender Adri, terrific write hun, Joe
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 17, 2007 04:00:38 AM Report
Holy moly!!!.. I wonder how hot it would get if he were actually in the same ROOM with you???..Talk about your PC screen-melting poems..I'm gonna hafta turn my Gateway off and let cool down for an hours or so...Great stuff, Adri..len
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on January 16, 2007 04:13:43 PM Report
Insert "cleaver comment about heat" here. :-)

"And all that i feel you clear, without you even beeing close or near"
A wonderful sweet line Adri. And a cool poem, I do not know how you do
it but your style is interesting and fun to read.

Be well, Linear.

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on January 16, 2007 03:18:45 PM Report
love it love it love Adri,



Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 16, 2007 01:28:26 PM Report
A very sensual write.. beautiful Adri



Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 16, 2007 12:43:55 PM Report
Intense beautiful love... passion on a higher level I only wish to find for myself...

Left me breathless... :o)

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 16, 2007 11:26:46 AM Report
This is a very hot, sensual write Adri, I loved it!!    Henry
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 15, 2007 10:52:24 AM Report
Adri:  beautiful and so sensual and soft and romantic...........I  LOVE it........



Lady D

Comment By: FreeGlata on January 15, 2007 10:24:05 AM Report
Dear Ah...

This is beautiful...and so heartfelt...amazingly tender! Love it and you, hon...



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