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Author Name: Freejohncarter 11 Comments
Date Added: January 17, 2007 13:01:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Daisy Chain

Daisy Chain



 



Through meadows



And fields of wonder



Across the rails



Where steam was king.



My lover and I



Would slip away.



We were young



and the sun had always been kind.



My mind was filled



With daisy chains



And poppy fields so red



And the summer corn



Which made a perfect pillow



For your head.



Through golden fields we ran



You made me a man.



Although the years have fled



I still see the corn



That had made a pillow for your head.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 23, 2007 09:33:32 AM Report
Fantastic Pillow.. ha ha brings back memories.....eh erm anyway

Congrats on the award for this :o)

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 04:51:45 PM Report
oh and congrats on a well deserved award for such a intuisive piece

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 04:51:05 PM Report
ah soul talk, and heart ache, sad true and powerful, great write as always
~Robin

Comment By: FreeJoseph Smith on May 2, 2007 03:58:51 PM Report
You have inspired me with your words and to you, I bid you a good day.

Congrats on the award and I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on February 7, 2007 03:22:47 AM Report
Congrats on the award. A wonderful piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. 

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeLinear Z on February 5, 2007 02:32:29 PM Report
Congratulations on your featured poem award.

A sweet and bright recolection, and a wonderful peice of writing.




Comment By: FreeAdri on February 4, 2007 06:29:54 PM Report
Oh John my dear friend!!!!  I am so glad this won!!!!!!!!  Congratulations my dear! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 4, 2007 06:27:15 PM Report
John:  a great stroll down memory lane...thanks for sharing and congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: PremiumMelanie on January 18, 2007 09:22:59 AM Report
This is a nice memory and a great write. The first time should be this romantic for everyone. I often wonder, how it influences men for the rest of their lives.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 17, 2007 02:28:38 PM Report
John,  You paint with vivid words that paint an awesome picture of a innocent time ..when you became a man.. she must have been so lovely to still remember the gold in the corn fields.. and a daisy chain... this is so lovely to read on a cold winter afternoon... It makes the heart warm... Hugs ~ She Whispers
Comment By: FreeAdri on January 17, 2007 02:13:36 PM Report
Beautiful John, I really like this.  Stunning. 
Adri x





 


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