Daisy Chain by john carter

		Author Name: johncarter	11 Comments
		Date Added: January 17, 2007 13:01:17	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Daisy Chain

Through meadows

And fields of wonder

Across the rails

Where steam was king.

My lover and I

Would slip away.

We were young

and the sun had always been kind.

My mind was filled

With daisy chains

And poppy fields so red

And the summer corn

Which made a perfect pillow

For your head.

Through golden fields we ran

You made me a man.

Although the years have fled

I still see the corn

That had made a pillow for your head.

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	Comment By: Lynn Cowman on September 23, 2007 09:33:32 AM	Report
	Fantastic Pillow.. ha ha brings back memories.....eh erm anyway Congrats on the award for this :o) Lyn. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Robin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 04:51:45 PM	Report
	oh and congrats on a well deserved award for such a intuisive piece Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Robin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 04:51:05 PM	Report
	ah soul talk, and heart ache, sad true and powerful, great write as always ~Robin Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joseph Smith on May 2, 2007 03:58:51 PM	Report
	You have inspired me with your words and to you, I bid you a good day. Congrats on the award and I really enjoyed reading this poem. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Cindy Bendel on February 7, 2007 03:22:47 AM	Report
	Congrats on the award. A wonderful piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. ~Cindy Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Linear Z on February 5, 2007 02:32:29 PM	Report
	Congratulations on your featured poem award. A sweet and bright recolection, and a wonderful peice of writing. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on February 4, 2007 06:29:54 PM	Report
	Oh John my dear friend!!!! I am so glad this won!!!!!!!! Congratulations my dear! Adri x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on February 4, 2007 06:27:15 PM	Report
	John: a great stroll down memory lane...thanks for sharing and congratulations on your Feature Poem Award. Lady Dragonwyck Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Melanie on January 18, 2007 09:22:59 AM	Report
	This is a nice memory and a great write. The first time should be this romantic for everyone. I often wonder, how it influences men for the rest of their lives. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on January 17, 2007 02:28:38 PM	Report
	John, You paint with vivid words that paint an awesome picture of a innocent time ..when you became a man.. she must have been so lovely to still remember the gold in the corn fields.. and a daisy chain... this is so lovely to read on a cold winter afternoon... It makes the heart warm... Hugs ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on January 17, 2007 02:13:36 PM	Report
	Beautiful John, I really like this. Stunning. Adri x Respond To This Comment