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Author Name: FreeRon Miller 14 Comments
Date Added: January 21, 2007 19:01:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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~ The Horizon ~

let me turn these hands back
just an hour or two
before the storm

when the clouds were barely visible

upon the horizon

let me erase this angry sky
color it blue
watch the sunset with you

the red, orange and golden hues

upon the horizon

Author's Notes:

If we only had that power.......

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on December 17, 2009 10:42:15 AM Report
Enjoyed this.  Congrats on your award!
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on December 15, 2009 07:41:13 PM Report
PS Congratulations on the Award.

 

David

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on December 15, 2009 07:40:17 PM Report
Hi Ron - as I was just saying to Alison Stormwolf:-

 










Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on December 15, 2009 05:44:10 PM Report

Hi Alison- it's terrible really - everything than any of us can think of saying is a waste of ink because Old Bill has said it already!

 

"One day too late, I fear me, noble lord,
Hath clouded all thy happy days on earth:
O, call back yesterday, bid time return,"

 

Richard II

 

 

David


 


Comment By: Freeb w mayer on December 15, 2009 05:54:39 PM Report
Beautiful...simple yet so powerful.
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on December 14, 2009 04:29:41 PM Report
Ron, I should hang your poem on my bathroom mirror to avoid my next foot in mouth situation.  This is a remarkable poem and well deserving of the CP award.  Congratulations !  I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 14, 2009 03:05:38 PM Report
Excellent penning..an exceptional piece all around! I feel regret in these line for an angry outburst and longing for the relationship to be as peaceful as it was prior to the argument. Love this poem Ron!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 14, 2009 09:47:08 AM Report
Hi Ron:  congratulations on the Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on December 14, 2009 12:52:34 AM Report
Congratulations!!  The horizon holds such mystery...sometimes great promise...sometimes sorrow and regret...to me this reads like a heart-felt apology..and if so...you have a wonderful poetic way of mending fences and solving problems...there is power in these few words.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on December 13, 2009 11:36:01 PM Report
Short, but loaded with imagery that's tough to beat. Congrats on the award!
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 24, 2007 09:59:30 PM Report
WOW! this is short, yet sweet and packs a punch!

I love it!! So much packed within this little write,

you are awesome dear!

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeGlata on January 22, 2007 01:45:24 AM Report
Beautiful work, Ron! I'm glad to see some of your stuff coming back...It looks good here!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 22, 2007 12:36:39 AM Report
Nice metaphor, Ron..It's like the difference between a light bulb and a pregnant woman..You can un-screw a light bulb:O)
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 21, 2007 07:40:56 PM Report
Ron:  I really enjoyed this write.  Very nicely done.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 21, 2007 07:39:20 PM Report

Wow...great penning, I'm not taking this literally. This applies so perfectly to a relationship. Nice work Ron! =))


~Barbara~






 


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