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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: February 04, 2007 03:02:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fluid Man

Fluid Man


The rhythm of my heart

Dances softly with my mind

Takes me on a journey

Beyond my mortal bind

I used to be a solid form

But am now a fluid man

My thoughts meander

Twist and turn

That slip and trickle

Through your fickle fingers.

To be the life blood

Of someone else

To become the one

The rhythm of my heart

Dances softly with your mind

Takes us on a journey

Beyond our mortal bind.


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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 4, 2007 10:10:14 PM Report
The power of lovee, Jon..I suspect we have no idea how much power love can have. I liked tis "One bsomes two" poem.. The useage of the word "Bind" seemed a little forced to me, but who am I?...len
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 4, 2007 11:05:22 AM Report
John:  beautiful write.  Lovely flow.......


Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 4, 2007 08:55:46 AM Report
John, Beautiful___ beautiful Oh this says so much about you and your feelings about you in general.. I always wait to read your sensitive passionate poems that tug at my heart and mind.. I'm off to work..Hugs and love~ Scarlett
Comment By: Freetasmia on February 4, 2007 08:03:34 AM Report
gorgeous choice of words..really beautiful...
Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on February 4, 2007 06:52:56 AM Report
Oh my, I loved the shift and shiver within this piece.  Nice work. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeAdri on February 4, 2007 06:39:29 AM Report
Just beautiful.  I love the flow and the rhythm.  A great piece John!! 
Adri x


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