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Author Name: Freejohncarter 1 Comments
Date Added: February 04, 2007 11:02:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I see a beauty

In sadness

I see a truth

That lies within

And I see you

For the first time

The you

That is

With him.


We used to

Have a good life

The one whos with my wife

With his smoothie shirt

Silly grin

His foot was in the door

Now Im there no more

He will play my music

Read my verse

Tell me

What more

Could be worse.
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Just got to let it out.
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Comment By: FreeAdri on February 4, 2007 02:49:46 PM Report
So sad John, beautiful but sad...
Adri x


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