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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 26 Comments
Date Added: February 05, 2007 07:02:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Place

Seconding your sentiments, I totally agree…

The future does look rosy, rosy indeed.
You see, you are my future,
Together you and me
That is all that matters, all I see.

A stranger I will meet in body, but strangers we will never be;

You are the owner of my heart already,
Feet sweeper of my soul
For whom I will willingly give over myself to thee.
To my knight, who has been waiting for only me.

You will fold your arms around me
And that’s the only place I need to be.
Floating high, walking on air
Being in your arms,
Nothing would compare. 

You know I’m on my way to you,
And baby, I will stay;
Where I can slow dance face to face
With you, everyday,
In my heaven, that is your place. 

Author's Notes:

In replay to Filthy’s poem “My Place”

 

http://www.creative-poems.com/poem.php?id=215400

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on October 8, 2010 09:00:09 PM Report
This is a very good work that you have created my friend.  Damon
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 22, 2008 01:56:44 PM Report
Words woven into a tapestry of love.  The positive and hopeful tone makes it a very enjoyable read.  Congratulations on the award.
Comment By: Freeabby on September 17, 2007 07:30:27 AM Report
In my heaven, that is your place -remarkable and quotable.

Your poems represent a sentivity of love and the tenuous connections

of intimates.

Abby

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 12, 2007 06:45:13 AM Report
beautifully done, astounding, well written, bravo

Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on June 18, 2007 01:03:55 PM Report

Seconding your sentiments, I totally agree…


The future does look rosy, rosy indeed.
You see, you are my future,
Together you and me
That is all that matters, all I see.

 

Brilliant poem..  I especially liked the opening stanza.

 

Antony.

 

 

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on May 6, 2007 07:20:03 PM Report
Wow....It's simple speech reaps such AWESOME rewards!

The work of an exceptionally talented expressionist....SMOOTH, lady...this was SMOOTH~

Congratulations on your award...very well deserved Adri.

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeCassandra on April 10, 2007 03:51:08 PM Report
really good.

grats on the award ;D

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on March 23, 2007 03:38:29 PM Report
Sensual and steamy, full of romance.....
Anticipation is an aphrodesiac......

Congrats on your award, Adri....

Margaret....
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 19, 2007 10:25:36 AM Report

Adri:  SUPER congratulations on this wonderful romantic write.  So deserving of the Feature Poem Award. 


Lady D


 


Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on March 18, 2007 09:37:59 PM Report
Beautiful reply Adri. I loved John's poem and this is also amazing. Congratulations on a well deserved award.
Helen

Comment By: FreeDevilish Minx on February 21, 2007 01:42:36 AM Report
wow, what a reply. this is beautiful, and I know i can't say anything better than what has already been said by those below me, but John sure is lucky.
Minxy

Comment By: FreeS on February 13, 2007 01:16:37 PM Report

great poem adri


Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on February 13, 2007 12:17:52 PM Report
Really nice write, Adri

 

Kx

Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on February 13, 2007 11:34:42 AM Report
this is amazing...you are such a romantic.
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on February 11, 2007 12:30:12 PM Report
A beautiful response Adri, your heart is in full display with this write. There is no doubt as to where you love's place is!   Henry
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on February 8, 2007 09:46:34 PM Report
I fell into the flow of this poem quite by accident.  That means you did a good job on the rhyme and meter and such.  But even more important is the feeling you conveyed.  Good job, girl!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 8, 2007 03:05:41 PM Report
Very romantic, loving and very tender Adri, beautifully written, Joe
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on February 8, 2007 12:18:44 AM Report
Awwww Adri, somebody's got a bad case of the 'kissy faces'! It's great isn't it? There's not a better feeling anywhere than to love someone sooo much that you can't see straight for wanting him.....May the tummy tickle you get when you think of him never go away! Booyah!

 

Jude

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on February 6, 2007 01:14:38 PM Report
A very beautiful piece, enjoyed it very much.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 5, 2007 11:01:29 PM Report

Love is in the air...so thick we can't slice it! You are glowing hun! Such sweet words here...they gave me a sugar high! =)


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 5, 2007 08:51:56 PM Report
So sweet, just like the author..This is romantic with a capitol RO, kid....len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 5, 2007 01:12:28 PM Report
Adri, This is so lovely to read a man and woman who really are not strangers at all.. It just took the right place ..right time... Wishing you both much happiness... Love doesn't wait long..
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on February 5, 2007 12:08:57 PM Report
Wonderful loving words from a dear loving heart, you two outdid yourselves! <3
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 5, 2007 09:22:59 AM Report
Adri:  beautiful -- and John is so lucky!!!!   Great romantic write.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 5, 2007 08:07:24 AM Report
A fountain of loving expressions from a heart on fire.

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGlata on February 5, 2007 08:03:21 AM Report
So beautiful!!!!

I know this is just perfect and will bring a smile to his face and heart.

Second stanza, first line..."I" should be "A"

I loved this!!!

Hugs my dear Ah...

GG





 


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