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Author Name: Freeseeker 14 Comments
Date Added: February 11, 2007 12:02:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Never Enough Time

Death laid me bare today
With a tap on the shoulder
to let me know it was there

Whispered your name to me
as if
I could some how change itís mind

A gift of an omen
and a curse of hands
that are bound

Paralyzed 
    by human insufficiency
Plagued
    by taunting hope

What shall I do for you dear
besides love you
beyond your days?

I wonder at your beauty
as the breath of life
still sighs itís lovely breeze

A quandary

Shall I wake you
Or let you sleep?

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeStarr on August 13, 2007 06:18:26 PM Report
Very Masterful." Whispered your name to me as if I could somehow change it's mind"

 I have held Death in my arms and this just said everything you feel in that moment. Once again Awsome!!.

Starr

Comment By: Freenoah count on June 25, 2007 11:11:47 PM Report
"Plagued
     by taunting hope".  Masterful.

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 25, 2007 03:25:38 AM Report
Congratulations on the well deserved award!  Great great job. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLinear Z on June 24, 2007 06:43:45 PM Report
Congratulation on the award. well deserved. beautiful work.

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 24, 2007 06:32:08 PM Report
Angelique:  congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on March 23, 2007 07:15:02 AM Report
Dear Angelique-
Life and death are the single facts we arrive with here on this planet-
They are the only certainties we know are destened to be-
All else in-between is the portrait of existence that we paint-
I really liked this one!
Best Wishes to You and Yours~
Peace~
James

Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on March 14, 2007 09:55:58 PM Report
HOLY CRAP!  Profound AND efficient... technically-speaking, I'm affraid you're expanding your lead on me...  (grumbles)  Well, that's what I get for slouchin'!  Instant fave right here as well!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 21, 2007 10:53:16 PM Report
Very deep and to me,  thought provoking. I saw death's door three times in my life, but I decide to not walk through. I like this alot Angelique, Joe
Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on February 17, 2007 07:17:08 AM Report
Outstanding poem! 

 

Antony.

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on February 12, 2007 03:58:05 PM Report
Very nice, wonderfully descriptive, enjoyed this.
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on February 11, 2007 08:03:00 PM Report
how very haunting,Angelique
for death to whisper anothers name
Well done !

Micky

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 11, 2007 04:28:10 PM Report
In fact into fave's for me

so real the emotion

so relevent the words to many

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 11, 2007 04:25:20 PM Report
moved byond measure............

 

I hear the poet's voice..

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on February 11, 2007 02:30:44 PM Report
deep, and smooth, nicely constructed. Good job! 




 


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