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Author Name: FreeTRACYF 10 Comments
Date Added: February 21, 2007 06:02:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Why Can't He See~
Why can't
he see
That he is
losing me

With his
Selfish ways
And the games
he always plays

Doesn't he realize
I love him with all my heart
But loving goes both ways
and he needs to do his part

He's out clubing
almost every night
I'm so tired of it
it's not even worth the fight

I can't take another
one of his lies
With each new one
my heart just dies

My heart is in prison
and wants to be free
But all it knows is
he holds the key

Hopefully he realizes
my love before it's to late
Because my love  is
quickly turning to hate
Author's Notes:
I wrote this for a friend, who is having a lot of problems with her boyfriend.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freekimberly on August 29, 2009 09:23:48 PM Report
I understand what ur friend is going through going through the same thing it sucks and it hurts but what else can we do very nice write brought tears to my eyes just bc i can feel her pain.
Comment By: FreeTina Steele on January 21, 2009 11:02:20 PM Report
wow this is so deep and many can relate. very nicely written, you definitely touch a secret place in my heart. i hope things get better for your friend.

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on December 21, 2008 02:12:15 PM Report
Dear Tracy-
I have to agree with the first comment made by Glata-
Anymore when I read a thought shared by you and My Friend~The Fletch~
I tend to worry a bit until I read the about portion~
May you both continue to enhance the minds of some who have not traveled
quite as far as a tem as the 2 of you have~
Best Wishes to You, Fletch and all those most important to Ya!
Peace~
James

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 21, 2008 10:57:09 PM Report
Well, some people grow old without ever growing up..This gal has a snowball's chance if she's waiting for this adult child to mature...len
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 12, 2007 05:37:07 PM Report
Sad connotations but a very well written piece. The rhyme scheme holds through each stanza. jp
Comment By: FreeChuck on February 24, 2007 07:26:07 PM Report
This is a sad but clever piece... nicely done.
Comment By: FreeKaren Marrah on February 24, 2007 11:44:26 AM Report
Good write Sis, and a very good venting.And like Penny said, it is very good to see you writing again. Keep up the great work girlfriend.....

I love ya..........Karen

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on February 21, 2007 11:50:02 AM Report
Wow honey,
 I am so glad we don't have these problems. I am so in love with you.
Did I mention I think you are Pretty! You are!
Love you ....You Brat!
Your Brat!

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on February 21, 2007 07:31:16 AM Report
Tracy, you have captured your friends pain head on dear.

I feel for those having to cope with this. I know what this is

like first hand (from my past). Sometimes it is simply better to

let go and release him, for time will heal and the heart is made

to love not feel pain. If a man/woman causes this much heartache

then it is time to say goodby. They say "if you love something, set it free,

if it comes back, it was meant to be."....I did this and he came back, and

I didn't want him back, I had moved on and found happiness else where.

Your friend will be in my thoughts, my heart goes out to her. Great

write! And, since you write so well, you should do it more often dear :).

Good to see you writing.

Hugs,

~Penny~

Comment By: PremiumGlata on February 21, 2007 07:23:35 AM Report
Until I read the "about" I was starting to panic! This is raw and full of hurt, and I think that anyone that has lived this particular hell can relate so fully. My heart goes out to your friend...and I hope that things work out for the best.

Love you, sis...and miss hearing from you!

Take care...

Glata





 


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