| Comment By: kimberly on August 29, 2009 09:23:48 PM
|I understand what ur friend is going through going through the same thing it sucks and it hurts but what else can we do very nice write brought tears to my eyes just bc i can feel her pain.|
| Comment By: Tina Steele on January 21, 2009 11:02:20 PM
|wow this is so deep and many can relate. very nicely written, you definitely touch a secret place in my heart. i hope things get better for your friend.|
| Comment By: James Lagoski on December 21, 2008 02:12:15 PM
I have to agree with the first comment made by Glata-
Anymore when I read a thought shared by you and My Friend~The Fletch~
I tend to worry a bit until I read the about portion~
May you both continue to enhance the minds of some who have not traveled
quite as far as a tem as the 2 of you have~
Best Wishes to You, Fletch and all those most important to Ya!
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on May 21, 2008 10:57:09 PM
|Well, some people grow old without ever growing up..This gal has a snowball's chance if she's waiting for this adult child to mature...len|
| Comment By: Joe Petro on September 12, 2007 05:37:07 PM
|Sad connotations but a very well written piece. The rhyme scheme holds through each stanza. jp|
| Comment By: Chuck on February 24, 2007 07:26:07 PM
|This is a sad but clever piece... nicely done. |
| Comment By: Karen Marrah on February 24, 2007 11:44:26 AM
Good write Sis, and a very good venting.And like Penny said, it is very good to see you writing again. Keep up the great work girlfriend.....
I love ya..........Karen
| Comment By: FLETCHER on February 21, 2007 11:50:02 AM
I am so glad we don't have these problems. I am so in love with you.
Did I mention I think you are Pretty! You are!
Love you ....You Brat!
| Comment By: VizualEnsemble on February 21, 2007 07:31:16 AM
Tracy, you have captured your friends pain head on dear.
I feel for those having to cope with this. I know what this is
like first hand (from my past). Sometimes it is simply better to
let go and release him, for time will heal and the heart is made
to love not feel pain. If a man/woman causes this much heartache
then it is time to say goodby. They say "if you love something, set it free,
if it comes back, it was meant to be."....I did this and he came back, and
I didn't want him back, I had moved on and found happiness else where.
Your friend will be in my thoughts, my heart goes out to her. Great
write! And, since you write so well, you should do it more often dear :).
Good to see you writing.
| Comment By: Glata on February 21, 2007 07:23:35 AM
Until I read the "about" I was starting to panic! This is raw and full of hurt, and I think that anyone that has lived this particular hell can relate so fully. My heart goes out to your friend...and I hope that things work out for the best.
Love you, sis...and miss hearing from you!